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Transformation

The flames dwindle to a flicker in the fireplace
I watch the stippled ceiling dance 
like stars in an exploding new universe
My chest heaves
In, then out
In silent anticipation of my transformation
From a world of emptiness
To one of a promised bliss,
And in one last gesture i blow a kiss
To this vanishing life
I reach out for those everlasting arms
To guide my tattered soul
Through a tunnel of light and love
And all thats wrong is now made right
I step from mortality to eternity's light,
Peace, joy, love fill my hollow shell
I wake up, a new ode to tell.

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:50:00 PM
    I love the second to last line- "peace, joy, love fill my hollow shell"-- that is amazing! Very beautiful write, I enjoyed reading it today :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
    Carl, i love the new tale you will tell... Does transformation feel good?? I enjoyed the purity from this poem... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Absolutely brilliant, my good friend! Superb writing... have a great day! Jack

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:06:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem.I also appreciated your visit and comment. Have a good evening

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 10:07:00 AM
    A profoundly beautiful write, Carl! Great work! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Carl, it's just gorgeous! - Deep and beautiful! - Have a nice weekend, do something fun. - or just relax. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)