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No One Else

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No One Else

Why do you care so much what I do
I smile cause it's between my and my dude
No one else
Sorry folks

Got something to say?
Have it your way!
I've got better things to so with my time
Like talk about you in a cool rhyme

We'll see how you feel in ten years
Hopefully it's rainbows and no tears
If not, then guess karma got you good
Sometimes it's not what ya did, but what you should

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:54:00 PM

    I like the message here. It is challenging from the start the effect actually had me not comment the first time I read it. I like how you close, because really sometimes, what we didn't do causes more disaster, pain, whatever word you choose, than what we did. I actually have a quote that kind of touches this. “Action may not bring happiness but there is no happiness without action.” William James, he's a philosopher. My comments usually consist of philosophy or psychology, actually he was both