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Empty Glass

Last of the wine has
been dripped
               Knuckles crack
and crack 
tongue slaps the lips 
              

The TV screams
 as the commercials beg
               The children starve,

             time never ends



can you 

             really
                          trust 


your mind? as insanity only conquers 
the insane. 

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:16:00 PM

    Now this is the way to make great words stick, lifes madness put beautifully...then clarity, but still one thinks? wow, nicely done man. {Read}

    Guglietta Avatar Frank Guglietta Date: 2/3/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:03:00 AM

    Hi, Way to go! I love your writing style. The rhythm and beat in your words bring forth the theme in a way that's realistic and touching - the difference in life situations is daunting but oh so real. Wellpenned! I’ll be sure to look out to more from you. Vicky.

    Guglietta Avatar Frank Guglietta Date: 2/3/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:07:00 PM

    This was a very enjoyable read and a true everyday story keep up the beautiful truthful poems

    Guglietta Avatar Frank Guglietta Date: 1/31/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Yeah, tough truth.....can be overcome with one person helping one person at a time, least that is what we must hold on to. Love your honest feelings here though

    Guglietta Avatar Frank Guglietta Date: 1/31/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:18:00 PM

    Your words speak so much truth, it's quite refreshing! And you have real originality- very unique style. I love this

    Guglietta Avatar Frank Guglietta Date: 1/31/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I enjoyed your pieces as well, Thank you