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Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 4:28:00 PM
    Caleb just love the image in this....David

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
    This is such a glorious picture...a perfect haiku, I'd say. This poem reminded me of the song Sea Fog by Keane, one of my favorite bands.. Gottah favorite this one, for the awesome picture you invoked in the mind's eye. . Always Laura

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:07:00 AM
    Nice use of imagery.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Very nice

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:41:00 PM
    This is so dreamy. I have been on camping trips before where you can catch a view like this from the canoe. You have penned it perfectly.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, the reason only prper nouns are capitalized in haiku is because it is meant to be open ended, a frozen moment not a complete thought, not a sentence. This is a lovely image your cut is after line 2 is dreamy. So glad to have a minute to read your work today. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:55:00 PM
    I could just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
    WOw Caleb, love this haiku... i can not stand the green image... but oh well! Love this haiku... Linda

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
    WOw Caleb, love this haiku... i can not stand the green image... but oh well! Love this haiku... Linda

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Caleb you have captured a wonderful image....excellent....hope you enter my contest....David

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
    oh I LOVE it, that last line is AWESOME.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Powerful image with such few words...wow