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River Fog

fog on the river
rises to greet the morning
the old willow stoops

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  1. Breidenthal Avatar
    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
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    This is such a glorious picture...a perfect haiku, I'd say. This poem reminded me of the song Sea Fog by Keane, one of my favorite bands.. Gottah favorite this one, for the awesome picture you invoked in the mind's eye. . Always Laura
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/9/2013 3:07:00 AM
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    Nice use of imagery.
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    Jeremy Martin
    Date: 3/5/2013 9:51:00 PM
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    Very nice
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 3/4/2013 1:41:00 PM
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    This is so dreamy. I have been on camping trips before where you can catch a view like this from the canoe. You have penned it perfectly.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/18/2013 2:40:00 PM
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    Hi Caleb, the reason only prper nouns are capitalized in haiku is because it is meant to be open ended, a frozen moment not a complete thought, not a sentence. This is a lovely image your cut is after line 2 is dreamy. So glad to have a minute to read your work today. Light & Love
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/16/2013 6:55:00 PM
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    I could just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
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    WOw Caleb, love this haiku... i can not stand the green image... but oh well! Love this haiku... Linda
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
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    WOw Caleb, love this haiku... i can not stand the green image... but oh well! Love this haiku... Linda
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    David Williams
    Date: 2/4/2013 12:19:00 PM
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    Caleb you have captured a wonderful image....excellent....hope you enter my contest....David
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
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    oh I LOVE it, that last line is AWESOME.
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 1/31/2013 5:45:00 PM
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    Powerful image with such few words...wow