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When Light Blooms

When Light Blooms The sky once filled of grey clouds of gloom Eventually gives way to a scenery when light blooms Caressing the birds softly as they spread their wings through the sky Set free, they soar through the welcoming spectrum of light A moment where relief was painted into hope’s silver lining By showing a mystifying glimpse of the sun shining For anything in this life that seems impossible to be shown Will have its magical time and place to be grown Thus dreams are grown not through our doubts but through our passion A flower shows its memories not through its death but through our compassion For when light blooms and appears to us from within It is then when the grey clouds of gloom will show us where the light begins.
Contest: Shaft of Light Sponsor: Seren Roberts 1/31/13

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 9:33:00 PM

    Gail, stopping by to enjoy all of Seren's "Shaft of light " winners.. Congratulations with your awesome poem. xox~ PD

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Gail, congratulations on your win in Seren’s contest, it's so hopeful.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:41:00 PM

    Your very lovely poem holds much truth, Gail! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:17:00 AM

    a great write and win Gail...congrats

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:14:00 AM

    Thank you Gail and congrats....Seren

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:01:00 AM

    this is just lovely Gail, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:18:00 PM

    Oh Gail...this is just so lovely and what a great message too !! Enjoyed and congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Yes, gloom balances the light nicely. Were it not for the gloom, no one would really know that the light is so good.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:50:00 PM

    very beautiful, Gail!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 10:21:00 AM

    this is beautiful Gail,, good luck in contest...

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:46:00 AM

    A beauty is this, Gail. What a lovely and uplifting poem!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:16:00 AM

    Gail beautifully written. You made your words come to life with the contest Shaft of Light. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Another beauty...I love the gray clouds of gloom giving way...blessings

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Gail, I love your symbolism and blooming light and how so much grows from within--wonderful write Gail!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Great write and beautiful concept. Good luck in the contest...

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:12:00 PM

    This is another awesome write by you my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!