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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Ah, and the bitter tears, not let go of - erode like cancer. Better to follow through and finish the work, the cleansing. Wow, tears of ammonia, that'll get it done!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Heartfelt and emotional. Blessings

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Wonderful and lovely piece,Joann....Good write...Keep it going, pal....

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:37:00 PM

    Aye, there's the fine bones I love.Tears of ammonia! POW! Fresh take on the subject, no mincing... liked that very much! So much there... my daughter doesn't understand happy tears yet. I wonder when children grasp the concept of tears of joy? My poor husband has two "girls" who cry at the drop of a hat. Hope you are well. I have a treasured 1/2 hr to call my own and I am glad I spent some of it with you. hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Very True Joann, enjoyed the read....Seren

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Strange ..... There are different tears and crying ..... A mother hears the difference on why the baby is crying. - A really nice poem Joann. - Have a happy day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:34:00 AM

    This is really a tremendous and dynamic write my friend! I surely loved reading this amazingly fabulous poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, quite then immense poem, Great Work!!