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Haiku Questionku

Stars twinkle above
overshadowed by the moon--
lovers hold their breath

Two hearts are beating
together like they are one
moonlight on her face 

He takes her hand
falls to bended knee
Will all his dreams come true?

Valentine Two Haiku and one Questionku contest.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:45:00 AM

    congratualtions dear Richard.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 1:16:00 AM

    Congrats Richard and thanks for pointing out my mistake....

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:26:00 PM

    Big congratulations again for another great write and super win my dear friend Richard! Cheers! love/hugs, Leonora

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/17/2013 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Leonora
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:08:00 PM

    It's so neat to finally see all the entries together on the list. Yours is great, Richard. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:06:00 PM

    many congrats on your win with this romantic entry Richard

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Congrats Richard on another win. Connie

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank Connie
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Lovely moon imagery. Congratulations, nicely done. -Jeremy

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jeremy, I appreciate the visit and comment.
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Richard, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda!
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:42:00 PM

    Who better to enter PD's questionku contest then the master himself ;) love it, naturally!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/31/2013 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It puts a lot of presure on me*lol*
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:05:00 AM

    Nice! Romance is in the air - stars, moonlight -Makes you go -I hope so. Never stop penning Richard! You paint a better world.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:46:00 PM

    AWESOME!!!!!! :) How romantic! Well, will his dream come true??? ;)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:16:00 PM

    You are on your game today, Rick! This is perfect.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/30/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks