Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

Deep from thou heart

words of thou neighbour 
peircing the soul in despair
let flow the pain as salty tears
shall not plant the seeds of anger
donot hold the blazing torch of anguish
it will burn thy heart plotting for vengence 
loosing thyself in the vast torment of madness
leave it be, everything shall wither with time
in forgetting the wreakage forgive thyself
pacify the urge, control thy thoughts
rash decisions are for tomorrow
today show enormous love
deep from thou heart

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM

    Congrats on your win...this is a bit different, I like it! BG

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:08:00 PM

    big congrats for your win, Ravi.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:47:00 AM

    Hi belated congratulations Ravi, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Congratulations Ravi ....Seren

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/21/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Congratulations Ravi on your special win xxx

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/21/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THank you
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Hi Ravi, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/21/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:43:00 PM

    I love the poem on it's own......however the shape adds the winning added touch....truly inviting! Congratulations!

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/21/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank yOu
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:56:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in the contest. Well written poem...enjoyed the read.

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/21/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx