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My Winter

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My Winter

Winter, a sad season, cold, foggy,
but it makes you think.

It makes you think of the past,
the present, the furture.

The best moment to think.....
is during the winter and when
you see that light out of the window.

It's the sun.....
a ray of hope.

That brings more questions
then a mind could answer.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 7:57:00 AM

    Margherita, i tuoi poemi sono molto belli, ma ho visto che non ne scrivi più da tempo. Perché? Anche in questo c'è un piccolo errore "furture" invece di "future". Puoi correggerlo rieditando la poesia. Ciao, Mario

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:38:00 AM

    Very true and a time when God steps in and helps us through it all Love it God bless keep up the good work hay check out my "I'm Going Home" Rev. Sam

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Beautiful! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:04:00 PM

    "Thinking is the best way to travel." That's a moody blues lyric. The way you write makes me think you might like them. They're my favorite band. I can see you sitting there in the window looking far off into the future. Await more to come from you. Have a wonderful season. :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:01:00 PM

    I thank Sean for pointing you out to me... a very fine poem! It makes me hate winter less... Terry

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:49:00 PM

    Absolutely delightful my dear friend! Welcome to the Soup. Thanks to Sean Sanders for telling me about you! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:56:00 PM

    This is a very beautiful poem my dear Margherita! I love it so much! thank you so much for sharing. Please continue sharing your awesome write and welcome to the soup! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 10:03:00 AM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:46:00 PM

    Lovely poem. x

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:47:00 PM

    very nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Smashing xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Delightful poem Margherita, welcome to poetry soup, xxx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:25:00 AM

    This is a wonderful write and it does make you think...contrasting thoughts, contrasting seasons...Thanks for your comments on my "Excuses" nonet...Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 5:06:00 AM

    love your winter, and your wonderful advice...

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:04:00 AM

    Had me smiling with this poem today . I woke up to -39 with a windchill of -49 and need a ray of sunshine and a ray of hope. Well said. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:24:00 AM

    Margherita, you have inspirited me to be a better poet, your poem is passionate and caring and honest. Keep writing poet.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:04:00 AM

    Margherita a big welcome to the soup, this is a wonderful poem full of great images, I like the way you force the mind to jump quickly from one scene to another, well done...David

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:53:00 PM

    This is insightful, Margherita...the sun does offer a ray of hope...it refreshes you, and makes you want to go outdoors and just have fun! Thank you for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:24:00 AM

    Welcome to the soup !! There is nothing better than seeing the sun on a cold winter day !! Winter blues need a little sunlight !! Enjoyed your poem !!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Glad to oblige. I liked the underlying message of cheer and hope. Keep up the work. There is a catalougue of forms here on the soup that you can use to try different ones. I think it is a fun challenge.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Very true. For some reason winter does make you stop and reflect. Maybe it's the people missing from the table at Christmas? Or perhaps its the prospect of a brand new year that some find daunting? Either way you've captured the spirit of the season very well. Keep writing!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Well this is very nice write,,, I remember when I was 14 and writing poems. very well done. One of my grandmothers name was Margeret ,, keep writing ;} going to favorites .

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:37:00 AM

    I was surprised to learn you are 14, very mature writing for someone so young. Well done.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Wopw!! This is so true. Welcome to the soup dear and keep pouring your talent through your pen. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:17:00 AM

    Good morning Margherita. - WOOOOOW, you've got a lot of readers and comments on your first poem - and that means it's a very good poem!! - You can be proud of yourself! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:47:00 AM

    Hi Marqherita welcome to the soup, very expressive winter tale loved it, look forward to reading more from you in the future, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:06:00 AM

    I love this little poem and how you reflect on life and the season through it. Welcome to Soup!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:09:00 PM

    Hi Margherita, it’s a pleasure to find such well expressed thoughts in such a beautiful write. Poetry that flows is poetry worth reading and rereading. Your description of winter and relation to thoughts is clever. Well done! I’m definitely looking forward to reading more poems from you. Vicky.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:39:00 PM

    I love this poem. Winter is my favorite time of year. I love snuggling up on the sofa looking out of the window and drinking a hot cup of coffee. Winter is the best time of year to do a lot of thinking. Very beautiful, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:22:00 PM

    M R... thank you for the invite.. and nice comment. Im thinking you spent much of your winter indoors. This is a good way of expressing such a sit down. Wish we had the coldness here. I need some alone time with my mind...welcome to the soup...luv..pd

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