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Passing

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Passing

Brown and green colors of dirt and grass 
three inches tall in spring mud between my toes 
wet from the sprinkler I ran through this afternoon.

Under a lowering gray sky fallen wet maple leaves 
red and yellowey brown veined against the stiff dying lawn
dusted with glitter from last night’s frost.

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 11:39:00 AM
    Oh I love this one. I can see Winter creeping in and in such a vivid way! Your pen writes with a true poets eyes. Lov, Shar

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/22/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm thankful it's not yet that cold where I am, but it soon will be... Jack
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:06:00 AM
    ...so fine written and lovely poem..thank you for sharing you great write dear friend Jack Jordan..<3 enjoyed :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 1/29/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind comments. Jack