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haiku 33

slush mounds
on the asphalt's shoulder --
wet mail

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Timothy Hicks Date: 3/18/2013 12:48:00 AM Was not expecting that in L3. It makes me wonder how long that mail has been sitting there to be so coated in snow! You seem to really "get" what haiku is all about... love your work!
Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/1/2013 6:49:00 AM Just so it doesn't freeze and you slip and fall. Winter and it's slush. Great haiku 33 Debbie. Warm Smiles, Connie
Catie Lindsey Date: 1/31/2013 8:47:00 AM yep! yep! that's winter for ya! :) Very well done. Hugs, Catie :)
harry horsman Date: 1/30/2013 2:18:00 PM keeping an eye on yours now Debbie, so i can advance my knowledge.. like this,,
elizabeth wesley Date: 1/28/2013 8:58:00 PM Wet boots and socks too, describes the end of my walk today perfectly. When will it end?
Annalise Brigham Date: 1/28/2013 8:07:00 PM : ) I love the clever twist, Debbie...never saw it coming!! Great job as usual. Love, Annalise
Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/28/2013 6:59:00 PM That'll do it!!
Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 5:55:00 PM I admire your haikus. Love the twists in line three. Thanks for sharing. I tried and ended up with 5,7,5 syllable count.