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Cracked Ice

One day I turned to ice. The whole world got colder in the time it takes to answer a phone call. He had my son. Five states away. My beautiful, precious, six year old boy. I was a soldier then, and make no mistake, "You're a soldier first, and a mother, second." Layers of ice formed, encasing me.

twigs encased in ice
reflect dancing moon light ~
a lone soldier cries

Christmas in Alabama always shines with ice. I am not God, I shouldn't have to give my only begotten son. Christmas Eve night was stunningly beautiful. Canopied by a brilliant midnight blue sky, stars sparkling like tiny diamonds. I poured out my heart to God, broken and alone in an empty schoolyard. I swung, and I swung, and I swung. I offered my gift of song to the Holy Child, as Christmas dawned upon the horizon. But morning found me broken, army boots on ice.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:49:00 PM

    Powerfull. This is the reason I want to write. To tell the story of life as it is and in some ways leave some to the shadows. Love your stunning creativity

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:02:00 AM

    This one is very emotive..I have wondered how it was for mothers who choose to serve in the military and have to leave their families..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:44:00 AM

    Catie, Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:08:00 PM

    Sis, congrats on this heartfelt write winning in the contest. I miss you and hope all is well. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:41:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, Catie, with this heart write. Love, Su

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Catie..

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:12:00 AM

    Wow, this masterpiece is stunningly heart-wrenching. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Debbie's contest.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:08:00 AM

    Stunning heartfelt read. Loved the haiku !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Catie, I will fav this, stunning write, beyond contest, it has a value intrinsically of it's own, like God's breath on our soul, may he leave his imprint on your heart, love and peace, xxx

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Brilliant and congrats on your winxx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Congratulations Catie....Seren

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:54:00 PM

    congrats on your win Catie

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Oh, Catie, I can barely breathe. There are times I think that there are two types of people in the world. There are the suit-of-armor types that keep everything safely locked inside. We can't see past all that steel. Then there are the others... you are one of the others. Water people. Crystal clear. Exposed. Honest, no coverings. The depths clearly visible, brave though slightly uncertain, genuine, and though strong, welcoming, also so completely vulnerable. Keep being you, cher! HUGS!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Yes my Catie-Did without all the words I love to drown in..you peirced my heart with this few. Congrad's dear, on to Spring ;) ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:51:00 PM

    I am not at all surprised how moved Debbie must have been by this heartfelt prose/haiku......so well deserved.....your win! My admiration!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:21:00 PM

    Very touching lovely piece!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Wonderful Catie!!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:36:00 PM

    poignant poem for Debbie. a hearfelt emotional ride.

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Nicely done! Take care, and God bless you!! JP

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 4:46:00 AM

    An explosive piece , reach in originality and style i just love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *smiles* RON

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:45:00 PM

    I do not wish for women to be on the battle field. Period.This was as sad...

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Whoa and ooohwee! If this is for that contest, they better duck. You came out swinging, kicking, and clawing. Alright now breathe! Poetic Just-ice!

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/29/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, Marlon, you always make me laugh! Thanks! hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Catie, you wrote it so beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing this.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Catie, wot a sad, heart-wrenching theme, but this is a superbly written haibun, to say the least. I am very impressed with this haibun!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:09:00 PM

    A heartfelt write conveying saddens and sorrow. Elements used in your poem made the ordinary appear extraordinary with emotions. Well done Catie. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Another amazingly bitter but magnificent poem. So sorry you have borne such sadness, Catie. God Bless

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:54:00 AM

    So sad and touching to my heart.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:48:00 AM

    What can I say_____You break my heart! Wish I could have been there for YOU. Such a sad and lonely BEAUTY... This truly is!

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/29/2013 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes, Frank, I, also wish you could have been there when I really needed someone. Thank you. Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:26:00 AM

    Catie-Did just make line 2 of the haiku say [reflect] drop the [ed] so it's present tense ;) GOOD entry! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:20:00 AM

    A touching write Catie~~Beautiful~