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Lost in Lukewarm Lumpy Potatoes

I don’t know when things started to change 
When like lukewarm potatoes our feelings became
When did life become so boring and mundane?
The years of pregnancy and childbirth were so exciting
Because I had a mission...and it was so inviting 
My happiness then, I didn’t have to feign

And I gave my life to this role, as the years were passing
Barefoot and pregnant again, I remember us laughing
But somewhere in the middle of pregnant and lactating 
And the myriad of hats I wore as mother times six  
Somewhere along the journey and in the midst of this mix 
I lost a part of me, too busy with play-acting 

The degree I obtained, the beginnings of career, 
I gladly gave them up…  I had children to rear 
Giving heart and soul to my family was all that I held dear
My children were, and still are, my whole life, 
And so was being a devoted wife
Until my reflection faded in the rear-view mirror 

I don’t know what is going to happen in the next scene 
Life has settled down to something dull and routine 
And time is so short, well it’s too short to dream 
Roles are changing but they’re basically the same 
I’m still searching but, really, I have nothing to gain 
If I found myself now, would it mean anything?

1/27/2013

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:31:00 AM

    This one is really touching...and a little sad...I LOVE IT!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:51:00 AM

    I dedicate a new poem I just wrote in honor of this poem, it touched me and inspired me to write mine :D "Hardship We Face"

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:40:00 AM

    Great job transposing the pain and difficulty of what alot of people can relate too. It is always hard to put yourself in someone else's shoes and walk the path they most walk. When I read this, it gives me a good idea of how difficult it must have been. It gives a good mental picture of the inner sadness that many feel. Although my story is different than yours, the feelings of sadness is shared by many. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:28:00 AM

    This is incredibly sad Becca. I can envision it all too well. Sometimes we try to please everyone else so much that we forget to please ourselves. My sister once told me that she loves her family to death, but wishes she didn't jump into marriage as quick as she did. I wish I could give words of encouragement, but I can't exactly relate... the best advice I can give is FIND yourself each and everyday... so then the search won't have to come up all of the sudden... it will be just a normal thing.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:34:00 PM

    WOW,,,,, this is what I feel/ think. you get a degree and think " I'm going to conquer the world" then you start folding diaper,think I'll do that tomorrow. But first I'll vacuum. I hope you put this in contest, it would win. ;}

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:12:00 PM

    i know how you feel as ive lost myself along the way somewhere and finding your self i mentioned in my poems a shadow of a di=oubt and troubled soul you still have love in your heart and soul and i like you xxdavidscott

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Writing of what is deep in your heart, can help you find the way up and out of the most difficult situations. The past is a road filled with lessons and hardships........but I hear the strength in your words between the lines......so don't think there isn't a wonderful future ahead. :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:21:00 AM

    I mean I'll keep in touch soon, it seems I ramble too much here, and trying to squeeze in the thoughts entering my brain right now, based on your poem, with this limited space umm is not working for me-- just want to say, thank you for sharing this Becca, and I hope you are well, coping well, I just wish you the best...I read you're in a funk :(-- you and me both...

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Hi Becca-- I thought I'd drop by right now and your title drew me in-- loved it, especially the alliteration and the metaphor of those lumpy potatoes. It feels like you've shared so much of you here and it gives us this fragile glimpse into yourself--the last 2 stanzas made me think a lot, esp your last 2 lines...& I think the answer to that is yes--at least that's what I'd like to think-- I think this life we all have, is a journey of finding ourselves, so much to gain my friend--will talk more

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Its never too late to.find who.you are..and i think you re someone with aa besutiful soul

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:20:00 PM

    very thoughtful and thought provoking, my friend

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:26:00 AM

    By the way this poem is excellent, you inspired me to write one as well. Soup mail.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 7:29:00 AM

    Soup mail

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:41:00 PM

    The irony is that only when you feel like your life is meaningless, it in fact begins to mean a lot to others connected with your life,.. as a mom, wife, friend, colleague, writer etc, enjoyed this write my dear friend!! Jag

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:14:00 PM

    Oh yes, my friend...finding yourself would mean EVERYTHING!...Sadly, this is a familiar story for so many women, yet you have told yours in a unique and eloquent way...'reflection fading in the rear-view mirror'...wow...Blessings to you, Becca - Tim

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 1:50:00 PM

    Becca ...... I hardly know what to say ...... your writing impress me, and it makes me sad. - I wish with all my heart that it will go well with you. - It is not easy to say what I would have said, when it must be done in English. - (I'm not that good) - Sending you a warm hug! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:56:00 AM

    Oh Becca, is it your youth you yearn for, i know of what you write, and sometimes poetry is an aid, and with you having this much talent, life can seem so mudane,,, but remember this, there are many here on soup, that love your poetry, to them you may be just the wonderful ray of sunshine that each and everyone of us need.....

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:55:00 PM

    AWE! This is excellent. Life is a funny thing. Sometimes it takes you down the road you want to go, and other times, it leads you in the opposite direction. Very good, very good indeed.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:41:00 PM

    The title was enticing, message was real but as the future is uncertain, what will the truth reveal? Felt the pulse of your poem and questions being asked, but lets hope a happy path is pursued and goal attained, good write and thanks for the offering.