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First Waltz

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First Waltz

the first waltz begins
Luna’s red evening gown--- 
rented for the hour
~*~
01/26/13

I took an amazing photo of the huge red moon rising at  around 6:00 p.m. with a backdrop of a navy blue sky...beautiful!

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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:54:00 PM

    I love your description of the moon wearing a dress... it's very imaginative. Yet the most beautiful things don't stay very long... sad to think it stayed for merely an hour. Good haiku!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:23:00 PM

    You render such beauty with so little words, priceless comes to mind as I read this Annelise xxx

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:50:00 AM

    Beautiful, I'm still litsenning

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:37:00 PM

    I LOVE this.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:25:00 PM

    lovely haiku - very well described, my friend

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/30/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Jack, Thank you, my friend.
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Magnificent imagery, Annalise, really brilliant expression!! Jag

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jag!! That wa an amazing sight!
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 5:28:00 PM

    beautiful write Annalise....

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Joseph! Hope all is well.
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Ahh...elegant metaphor (or simile?) my friend!...Makes me want to dance with the moon...

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Tim!
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:10:00 PM

    What a beautiful simile!

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Isaiah! That was an amazing sight.
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Delightful, my dear poet friend! Hugs, Jack xox

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Jack! I'm glad you liked it..
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:28:00 PM

    An amazing Haiku -beautifully worded. Your comments on my Senryu Love is incredible, Annalise. Thanks -Mohammad

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mohammad! As to the comments on your "Senryu", did I get the meaning or was I off? Sometimes we each read something different in a poem.
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:59:00 AM

    Beautifully written!

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sharon! Hope all is well.
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 AM

    Satisfaction of enjoying the moment .... Lovely Annalise. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise! That was a sweet momet!
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:58:00 AM

    this is amazing Annalise, just love your poetry....love the visual aspect of thei poem....

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/29/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : ) Thank you, Harry! I'm sure you know that I love your poetry too!
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:03:00 PM

    most vivid portrait Annalise my friend as beauty exudes from your lovely words ..thankxx for prayers and concern during my health crisis ..am so grateful to still be on earthly side due to God's Grace .. and good friends like u .. on slow mend and hope to be on as health allows .. hope all is well with u ..do u know how Carolyn Devonshire is doing? happy Sunday with blessings.

    Brigham  Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 1/27/2013 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda! I'm happy to see you posting "in person" : )! Glad you're doing much better, Linda. Yes, Carolyn is fine, she's just real busy. Do take care.