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Evening Primrose in your dream

I wanna be like the fragrance of an Evening Primrose gentle and sweet beneath your sheet Cluster of petals which bloom pink blossoms to wither softly into your sleep Tell me What is the colour of your night? Do you need me by your side? Let your window slightly open Call the wind to breeze me in Let your candle slightly burning Feel me swaying deep within Tell me What is the colour of your night Do you need me by your side? Don't feel blue and don't be lonesome I would stay till dawn greets day Then you'll find me by the stream Evening Primrose in your dream

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 4:01:00 PM

    This may be may favorite write of yours..Love the "Tell me What is the colour of your night Do you need me by your side? Excellent......TAH

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:45:00 AM

    Rereading this gem of you!!Amazing poetry here.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 3:05:00 AM

    Very nice. I enjoyed this one a great deal. I especially liked the line, "To wither softly into your sleep". Well done. Rockman

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Breathtaking write! I saw you jumped to the top of the charts. I can see why! More power to you! :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:12:00 AM

    Fantastic! Certainly your poem is not here by accident! Love it!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Colour, the deepest blue you've ever seen surrounding the full moon.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 11:03:00 AM

    such cool emotion olove it mate a subject I like writing about alot love romance as your notioce not everything i write is doom and gloom thankyou for your coments nice to have another new member ive never heard from look forward to reading more xxx davidscott

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:02:00 AM

    So lovely and enchanting that one would want to live in this fascinating dream. (^_^)

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:28:00 AM

    Charmaine, you're simply as beautiful as you're poems. I love every bit of the ...primrose

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:52:00 PM

    beautiful write Charmaine ....it's like a lovely song..... a melody of love

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 12:17:00 PM

    Charma, a brilliant outstanding write, it flows and sways in poetic excellence, holding each line in perfect opulence, fragrantly intense, love it...David ......... this is done in my contest form of consonant/vowel...I hope you enter ....

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:02:00 PM

    Each verse like the tranquil sounds of a backdrop waterfall. Please read my Moth to Flame and tell me what ya think.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:27:00 PM

    Very tender Charmaine , lovely xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 4:54:00 AM

    Thanks for the footle comment so here we go!.... What a bummer! Everything I do seems to come out wrong!...you mind loaning me some of your good: 'Karma, Charma?'...I promise I'll pay it pay you back... and by the way, I love your off-beat poems... you're a little wierd (in a good kinda way) aren't you, 'Quirky-Chirpy?'...I know I mispronounced your last name but gimmie a break would ya?...haven't you ever hear of 'poetic license?' - Tim

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 2:17:00 AM

    So beautiful!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:39:00 PM

    LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY! Hey, you, :-) My next contest may be up your alley, methinks, after reading this steamy-dreamy write which lets the mind delightfully fill in the blanks. Stay tuned! Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Enjoyed your poetry Charmaine, beautiful as always, have a great weekend xxx

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:43:00 AM

    ........................ ‡ Hey Girl, Twas Stopping By To See If Your Lovely Beauty Had Any New Enchanting As In Beautiful, Poetic Creations, My Sweet Beautiful Charmaine ˜ Also, To Say Hello And Wish Your Priceless Radiance The Most Wonderful In Love Made Days ˜ Stay Beautiful! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:35:00 AM

    A dreamy poem... so soothing... as sweet as a rose, as prim as is proper... very nice, Charma... Terry

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:23:00 AM

    A burning desire! This makes a person feel at ease. Very good write!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:24:00 PM

    Beautiful and so softly spoken dear poet ! I loved it my dear friend ! So nice to read you again ! Have a wonderful eve dear friend ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Breath taking! I looooove the refrain- and the ending verse. This is a very beautiful write :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:44:00 PM

    "Tell me/ What is the colour/ of your night/ Do you need me/ by your side?"!! : ) Ma che gli hai fatto tu a quest'aria che respiro/ E come fai a starmi dentro ogni pensiero/Giuralo ancora che tu esisti per davvero. Bellissimo!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:52:00 AM

    Hi Charma, Just logged onto the soup after a long abscence and your poem was the first that I read and it speaks to me..as great poems should..so beautiful and great coming from a beautiful sweet person. Marty

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:51:00 PM

    Such a beautiful Romantic poem here By you Charma.This goes to my Favs.Thanks for reading and commenting at my poem.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 4:32:00 PM

    May the breeze softly reach your candle and watch it flicker with the love of your special someone! This is such a sensuous write, so filled with its own special flare of passion! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a precious piece, Fantastic Work!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Ahh! So romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 2/1/2013 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by..Sara
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:19:00 PM

    Whew!...'Tell me, what is the the colour of your night'...what a line, what a poem...another gem from the queen of romance...

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Wow, this is beautiful! I LOVE the first stanza.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:12:00 AM

    You want to be in someone's dream. Great, originality. Thanks for reading my stuff, Charmaine

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