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About This Poem

More Wine Please

Dinner for Two:
Red wine
Fine dine

Dessert for Two:
White wine
Cloud nine

Liquid Courage:
More wine
More spine

Liquid Stupidity:
Chug wine
Cross line

The Perfect Gift:
Bring wine
Be mine

Where It All Began:
Pre-wine
Grape vine

The Next Morning:
Post-wine
Most whine

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  1. Smith Avatar
    Caleb Smith
    Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
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    Haha...ok...liquid stupidity, chug wine, cross line had me cracking up...I was picturing you downin' a bottle and raising hell...this was so fun to read!

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober Date: 3/1/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha I'm glad you liked it! I have definitely been known to partake in a little wine once in awhile!
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    Charles Clive
    Date: 2/10/2013 3:23:00 AM
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    A worthy winner. And thank you for your comments. I really appreciated the feed back from your Competition. Charles.
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 2/10/2013 1:39:00 AM
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    Very creative and brilliant, Heather, Congrats!! Jag
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 PM
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    Heather, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 2/9/2013 6:42:00 PM
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    Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congrats on your 1st place win, Heather! Love, Kim
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 2/9/2013 6:16:00 PM
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    Cute, congrats on your win xxx
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 2/9/2013 2:16:00 PM
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    Bet you were not 'Sober-Ober' by the time you finished this, Heather...I'm sure you had a bottle available for each footle?...All were hilarious but the hangover footle is my favorite...Congratulations my friend! - Tim
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 2/9/2013 12:26:00 PM
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    Ohh these are good. I guess I should have given each of mine a title as well for them to be a real footle...per definition. Congrats on your win... More wine?? Raise a toast !!!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/9/2013 11:36:00 AM
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    Congrad's on your fun win. Just loved these Heather. [I once was in love with a Steven Ober from Brooklyn NY!] Light & Love
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/9/2013 10:55:00 AM
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    Yours was one of my favorites all along. BIG congrats in the contest.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 2/9/2013 9:40:00 AM
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    Congratulations my dear poet friend Heather on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 2/9/2013 9:30:00 AM
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    ‡ Stay Away From The Red Drink The White And Most Likely You Won't Whine, Sweet Beautiful Heather ˜ I Really Love This Rhyme Its Message Its Flow; Super Cool! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/9/2013 8:02:00 AM
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    Loved these first time round too well done Heather xx
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    arthur vaso
    Date: 2/8/2013 2:58:00 PM
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    ah now this one makes me smile, very good!!!
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    Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 2/1/2013 12:50:00 PM
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    Excellent title..grabbed my attention as well as this write of yours..I'll be on stand-by to see what you placed in the contest.."1st" regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)
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    Becca Lucius
    Date: 1/29/2013 8:01:00 PM
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    haha Oh my gosh.. :D you are one of the most creative poets I've seen.. amazing girl! I love your writing!
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 1/28/2013 12:33:00 AM
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    Excellent poem..keep your thoughts flowing.Welcome to ps
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/27/2013 5:24:00 PM
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    thanks for your comments today. i always love reading what you have to say. I don't think I will find a poem of yours to read and I need to hurry off for the day, but hopefully you will have a new one up soon. Luv, Andrea
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    jack horne
    Date: 1/26/2013 2:41:00 PM
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    lol, great footles - congrats on your wins, my friend
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/26/2013 8:55:00 AM
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    THIS is how it is DONE!!!! I love this series. You hit it out of the park, my friend!!!
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    even flow
    Date: 1/26/2013 1:56:00 AM
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    I love this, such a light and easy read but very clever. It made me smile a lot especially the liquid stupidity verse. I am getting a lot of pleasure from your work, thank you.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
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    brilliant love them xx
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    Sean Goodwin
    Date: 1/24/2013 11:28:00 PM
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    Yes very nice. Thoroughly enjoyed reading'em. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for commenting on my haiku. -- Sean
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 1/24/2013 10:03:00 PM
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    Good job, Heather! These are good! Love, Kim
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/24/2013 8:50:00 PM
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    Great "Footle Fun" my dear Heather! Got a kick out of it... hugs, Jack xox
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/24/2013 7:03:00 PM
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    This is fantastic! You my dear are a clever girl.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 1/24/2013 6:38:00 PM
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    This is a wonderful write Heather! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a beautifully written piece! I loved in particular the 'Dessert for Two', "White wine, Cloud nine" part! Great Work!!


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