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Store of Ideas

Perception
That’s the flashlight you use to view the world with
Hope 
A cover to brighten that light, but really just a myth
Compassion 
It was right there in front of the vodka on the shelf
Sympathy
Only the vodka is left there for anyone or myself
Depression 
Well I’m positive I can find some of that here
Love
That’s funny, let’s get the vodka so we can be clear
Friendship
That’s all over town they say it’s worth a pretty penny
Trust
If you want that with friendship it’s gonna cost you plenty 
Patience
Did you come to buy or just window-shop at the store
Time
Ok that is enough, exit stage right, there is the door

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:15:00 PM

    hum, I think we view the world with self perception. and if we fail. we have no one to blame but the shelf. LOL.(self) I like it when I shine away from the negative shades around here... xox~PD

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/25/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I never shy, I lunge forward. The shelf, the self, very perceptive of you, maybe that's the self perception now reflected or projected, anyway thanks always for your insightful comments.
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:43:00 PM

    hmmm... it's interesting, depressing, written creatively... I think you're wrong about hope being a myth but otherwise I tend to agree... :) Nice write.

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/25/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for your comment.