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The Pill Of Life

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The Pill Of Life

If there was a pill that I could take today
This pill could hit the spot without delay
And this pill was the same shape as your loving heart
It will cure all my ills and my pains for a start

It can make a path down to my weary soul
And it can build me up and make me feel whole
If this pill is your love and you send it to me
Then I will swallow it quickly and just wait and see

This pill must come with a strong warning too
Will you take my heart shaped pill I sent to you
This heart as a pill will work for the one and only
Cures all the ills and stops one being lonely

If affected don’t drive or use heavy machines
Give to the one you love, and start living your dreams

 © 23/01/2013
Contest Entry for The Pill of Life Contest sponsored By Russell Sivery

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Congratulations Mandy :-)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Mandy, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 4:39:00 PM
    A love pill for the heart or a heart pill for love, ha...a pill like that would have Romeos & Juliets roaming the streets!! Can you please FEDEX one to me?

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:19:00 PM
    Mandy congrats on your win. I love that the pills was shaped as a heart. Grat poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Congrats Mandy .....Seren

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:32:00 PM
    congrats on your win Mandy

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:04:00 PM
    I see a winner here Mandy, how did I miss this, congrats ahead of time xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha that's the kiss of death then lol, hi nice to be back my little flower xx
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Dear Mandy: I read several pieces from you and this one has caught me deeply. Remarkable piece indeed! There is non sense about this one! Please, keep writing and tell me if you have done some publications.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi George , thanks for the comments they are much appreciated, and yes a couple published my friend xx
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:13:00 PM
    awesome, Mandy - hope you're having a great weekend x

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks jack and hope yours are improving xx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Gives new meaning to heart medication. Good one Mandy.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    better than digitalis Richard lol xx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 1:29:00 PM
    terrific poem :))))

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Jim xx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Reads as if you are describing "soma", taken by the inhabitants of London in Aldous Huxley's novel "Brave New World".

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha never heard of that one Robert must find a copyxx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 6:59:00 AM
    soup mail Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:50:00 AM
    I love this poem.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw thanks Vesna luv xx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 3:36:00 AM
    Wonderful poem on pill heart promised to one and only with dream of life. Thanks for your comment on my write. Please consider an weapon in the place of Chocolate, then see what it bears. Loved always, my friend, bl

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks bl much appreciated xx
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Hi GG good morning to you, love this if only such a pill was available, have a couple of writes for PLF will post them today sometime, have a grea weekend my friend, all the best Owen

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Owen great will look forward to them xx
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:26:00 PM
    A pill like this would be off the shelves in a jiffy!! We all could use a pill like this now and then!! Where can I buy them?

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks harry i'll have them send straight over, not that you need help with your poetry. xx
    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/25/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i 'll have some sent over Carrie luv xx
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 3:52:00 PM
    if taking a pill can produce poetry like this,, then i would like a perscription, please....love the sonnet and love this poem...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks as always harry xx