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Oh, she's the sharp edges

She decides, 
it is set;
her eyes 
ask 
and answer.
Shoulders 
stretch 
back,
one higher 
than the other,
breasts 
push 
out, 
pelvis in-to 
a shallow c-shape,
rhythmic movements 
like breathing,
more gliding 
than walking;
a slight touch, 
then
a slow turn 
to the right,
slender fingers 
moving 
the air of 
her body
deep 
inside 
his space -
her seduction dance.

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  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Oooo la la! What a steamy write, this is sensational! I love the flow... it carried me through and kept me engaged with every line! Love this, thank you for sharing :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/24/2013 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And thank you for your supportive reply! Jack