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Love at first sight --Cookie Jar


                                                           
Cookie Jar




If you were close and not so far away
I would bring you a cookie from my 
Cookie Jar
Hoping you would take a bite,
                                                                       Love 





                                                                   at first sight!
( a dedication to ladies)




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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:16:00 PM

    ha..love the dedication... and it happens to be I'm a cookie lover.. now give me my cookie... :-)...JK.... (soupmail)..*always~ :-) Linda

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/28/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD, Your wish is my command, lovely lady.xx
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:20:00 AM

    If you were far and not so close I would sing you a lullaby From afar Hoping it would bring your Love at first light! Thank you for the dedication, on behalf of all woman, back at her dear one.

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/28/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You saidf it all mystic Rose, what more can I say?
    Rose  Avatar Mystic Rose Date: 1/28/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops a typo mean to say back at you dear one.xxx
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:44:00 PM

    love your reply to my comment I left below.

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/28/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea, what wouldn't I do to make you enjoy your cookies, must please the lady.
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:01:00 AM

    It's been a long time since I have heard [cookie] used in this way. It made me smile. Light & Love

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/26/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well Debbie there are some rhymes which sticks in the head from school days ,even infancy and this was one which was played out in a game of Tic. Don't know if you played it our way, but I rememeber we used to say, Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? yes me, no you and then we would call out a number and that person would be chased until caught. Something like that(memory is fading!).
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 1:50:00 PM

    So sweet, Robert...... love it ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/25/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne, there is always a cookie for you.
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:58:00 PM

    Now I want a cookie!! Very cute poem :)

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/25/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    pleasure sharing, hope you like cookies
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:25:00 PM

    Lovely dedication Robert! Cookies are always a temptation.

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/25/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    my cookiies I hope are irresistible, hope you will take a bite.
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:44:00 PM

    yum!! What kind of cookie is it??

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 1/25/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    One with ''eat without caution'' written on it.