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Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 5/6/2013 6:35:00 PM
First attempt? nice start.
James Fraser
Date: 4/8/2013 3:26:00 PM
On the waves below the skies, are carried various sounds. But the sounds that need to abound, are the sounds of contented sighs. Nice one Becca, James :)
Sean L Sanders
Date: 1/30/2013 8:55:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
harry horsman
Date: 1/30/2013 6:48:00 AM
love this heartfelt poetry you pen here Becca...
Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 1/28/2013 11:39:00 AM
A long ways away, and yet so close. Amazing. I like this one.
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2013 8:54:00 AM
Good morning Becca it appears I have been following behind you this morning as you have commented on the winners poems. You are a sweet and thoughtful angel. Have a great weekend.
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/25/2013 2:09:00 PM
You are so clever Heather xx
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2013 12:22:00 PM
Lovely piece, you have a special way with words Becca.
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/25/2013 7:11:00 AM
It's a lovely short form and you did it so well! Thanks for stopping by my work. Light & Love
Vesna Kovrlija
Date: 1/25/2013 5:01:00 AM
Wonderful tribute!
frank herrera
Date: 1/24/2013 10:53:00 PM
WHAT CAN I SAY? LITERALLY AWESOME!!! Your Poetry REIGNS!
Cyndi MacMillan
Date: 1/24/2013 9:48:00 PM
Lovely rondeau, and one of my favourite forms. I love the French forms. Ballade is also a form I adore. Have you tried the ballade? I think you'd really enjoy it! Hugs, Cyndi okay. this is WEIRD. My girl is 3. I was thinking, I haven't slept in 3 years. Then I go to fill in the captcha and it is 3YRS. Freaky! I think I am taking that as a sign to just go to bed. LOL.
Annalise Brigham
Date: 1/24/2013 5:02:00 PM
A lovely tribute to your friend and mentor, Becca. Thanks for visiting my page. Always, Annalise
Jack Ellison
Date: 1/24/2013 8:51:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to a mentor and great friend! You are blessed to have found such a soul! Hugs, Jack xox
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/24/2013 8:44:00 AM
Just beautiful dear BECCA
GG JJ
Date: 1/24/2013 8:34:00 AM
Hi Becca, I know very well your friend. He told me about you "she's so sweet ... elle est une merveilleuse femme au coeur rempli de générosité, de tendresse, d'amour. Elle pense toujours au autres comme si elle pensait à elle-même ... She's a wonderful Lady"
Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2013 8:04:00 AM
Good to have a mentor who can lead one to reach upward and soar..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2013 7:14:00 AM
Yes, you are good with FORMS as well as free verse. Use whichever you want and SOAR with it!
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 1/23/2013 2:09:00 PM
I can very well relate to the feelings expressed. The other person should be really lucky and excited to receive such a sweet message. Thnx for your sweet visit, Becca! :) Jag
Anne Currin
Date: 1/23/2013 1:16:00 PM
Absolutely stunning tribute to your friend, my lady! My favorite part is the third stanza, I know how it feels to have feelings minimized- it is quite special when you find someone to treat you with sensitivity :)