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To the Grave

You've only been gone a few hours
True love is a planet of power
Time seems to stand still
Normal obstacles transform into a gigantic hill
I want to tell you about my day
We're past that part
It's way too late

Your laugh and touch are now memories
I miss your weird and interesting stories
When you kiss my hand and mind
The rare good acts for those show your kind
Perseverance and passion are fruits I favor
Those times I thought about telling you later
How much I loved you was a mistake
Having not said “I love you” now
A burden I'll take to the grave




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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 4:19:00 AM

    Words left unsaid sometimes haunt us forever. You might like "I Never Told You So" on my posts. .... Great write here..... Jake

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:33:00 PM

    It is sad in a sense when we say a poem like this is wonderful. I mean the story of regret, a lost hope, a sad conclusion of mutual experience, words not said, I think you get the point. The poem IS absolutely wonderful for the many emotions it stirs. Great job.

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/24/2013 9:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Im very flattered by your comments :) Cheers, Sharon
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:12:00 PM

    i do like this poem. i felt this way just about a week ago.

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/22/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad we're both past a rough week! Good times will come again :) Cheers, Sharon