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Maker of good feeling pill

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Maker of good feeling pill

The pill in sticky sweaty hands doth lie
Full of importance doesn't know why

The route finder has decided the journey, commencing.
via the saliva gland which wets the pill they're dispensing

Along the path from the pharynx where you are swallowed
Taking the A road to the oesophagus where pushing is allowed

Until it reaches journeys end the main line station of stomach
Then on to many branch lines being dispersed to enact

Have you realised which pill is the be all and end all of your being
What is the name of this important maker of good feeling

The Happy Pill, if your happy nothing else is of importance
Happiness is and Happiness does, with abundance.


Pill of Life Contest

dated 22/01/2013

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Seren,, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda for the congrats
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Debbie
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:29:00 AM
    I followed that pill all the way, Seren! Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol what a journey .......Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Many congratulations My little star what a good one xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    diolch fy chwaer fawr (thank you my big sister).....Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:32:00 AM
    And where do you get these pills, Seren?... A doctor or can you buy them over-the counter?...Congratulations my friend...well deserved! - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i am the maker of the happy pill, i am the one to bring happiness......Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:11:00 PM
    Congratulations Serene..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    its ok Donna a few people type Serene will answer to most things ....Seren
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 2/23/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:31:00 PM
    It seemed as if we were on the journey ...the path of the happy pill. Write me a prescription if it works!! Congratulations on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    as i said earlier I am the maker of the happiness pill, ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Congrats Serene on your 1st place win great pill you invented here, xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose and to you too.....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:55:00 PM
    glad to see you on the list, Seren, I sure remember this cute poem. Congratulations.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 7:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea .....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:29:00 PM
    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph....Seren
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:10:00 PM
    This is adorable :) best of luck to you in the contest, my dear!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/24/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Anne Seren
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Hi there this is good Seren can I have one please ? xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/23/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nah Mandy you dont need one of these....Seren
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Hi Sponge Bob great write if only there were such a pill, it could cheer up a lot of miserable people, good luck in the contest my friend, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/23/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha i wondered what the heck you meant. then I realized. All in the mind Owen, Thanks a bunch for the best wishe...Seren
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:26:00 PM
    A clever way to approach the theme, which I find kind of difficult, so I commend you on this poem, Seren. I want to buy a bunch of those happy pills. Well, I am pretty happy already but I have loved ones who could use them as well!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/22/2013 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, I try to write "different" poetry, doesn't always work,but have fun trying, as you say was a difficult one to approach....Seren
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:20:00 PM
    a very knowledgable and very well written poem... Harry

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/22/2013 9:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry was trying to do something different......Seren
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:49:00 PM
    there are pills for happiness. i wish there wer'nt but there are.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/22/2013 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wasn't thinking of the drug induced pills. ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
    I take a bottle of them per day, leaves a permanent smile on my face :) enjoyed your write, love Elizabeth

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/22/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Elizabeth thank you for commenting, wasn't sure when i wrote this if it made sense lol. You understood so that's great.....Seren