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A Better World For All

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A Better World For All

                   Behind the seven great mountains with sugar tops on
              There lies the valley where there is only love and happiness
                      There are not many who know these mountains
                       and rather few people know about this valley
                     The birds are singing so beautiful all year round
                  The flowers make themselves attractive to all the bees
                        People live in a wonderful harmony with love
                      No unfriendliness, no jealousy, no hard feelings
            This valley is like a little mini paradise, where everyone is happy
                      In happiness and love grow only the best of the best
                I've been searching for this valley all my life without finding it
               If we all were looking together maybe we will find a better world






22.01.2013
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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:28:00 AM

    i hit on a jackpot wjile searching for some poems i haven't read yet, anne.. this paradise exists if we all make it so; what a splendid write with lines that flow... you inspire!..;) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2013 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 5/30/2013 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and sweet congrats!..:)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:38:00 PM

    What a beautiful thought about a beautiful place, Anne Lise. I'd love you to find it. - Red

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Well, Anne, I will go with you in search, and we shall have a grand time on our journey to this magical place ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2013 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, Debbie. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:12:00 PM

    Sounds like a wonderful place, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/26/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:07:00 PM

    Congratulation on your win. Nicely done Anne. Connie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 11:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Connie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Anna Lise congrats on your win with this little gem, great idyllic picture...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Anne Lise, so glad to see you here with this well deserved win!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Craig! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Lemme know if you come across it! Congrats!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:40:00 PM

    Anne, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations! - Thanks for letting me join. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

    my fav poetess Anne lise :) thank you for sharing your amazing talent :) enjoyed so much your great sharing <3 much luv and hugs :) Sk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/20/2013 12:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - <3- Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Sukmawati. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:55:00 PM

    What a joy that would be..It's nice to feel the love <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Dan. - oxox f.e.f. / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:33:00 PM

    I just love the way you have so beautifully imagined how it would be, if we all could get together and search for this valley of paradise. The message is deep down in our hearts where we should be looking and then creating this passage for others to enter embrace and create a better world for all. Lovely poem Anne Lisa - oxoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You have interpreted my poem so good and right, Saleem. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:36:00 AM

    Message very powerful and the words well picked and brought together love this poem i hope others perceive it for what it means

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It will also I hope, April. - We must look into our hearts and become better people. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:35:00 PM

    Lets hold hands and find this Utopia together. Lovely poem Anne-lise. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2013 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, Phyllis. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:54:00 PM

    It's Shangri La!! Wish we could all find it, sweetie.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, Andrea. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Who would not want to live in this wonderful place....if only this were possible. But we can always hope that in the future there is a paradise such as this. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Carrie. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:42:00 AM

    Excellent expectation. My sweet friend, I feel there is a world of which your dream depicts. In our world, it's totally impossible at present due to hundreds of reasons. Where all the people are perfect there this world may be. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2013 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, bl. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:37:00 AM

    Your beautiful poem describes a beautiful place.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2013 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Vesna. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 5:30:00 PM

    I also wish we could find that valley here, Anne Lise..that day will come! It's a wonderful poem but a heart that loves. Great job! Love and hugs, Annalise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, Annalise. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:49:00 AM

    So true Anne Lise, this is such a beautiful gem. So much promise as well. I hope your week has been a great one thus far. Have a fab weekend ahead ;) love & hugs Wilma xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Wilma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Shangri-La? I hope you find it. If you do, please let me know where it is. I would love to live there. Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Jack . - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Nice to live in this place... so cool, so peaceful..a very beautiful image you paint my dear Anne Lise. thanks for sharing..Hugs, Maria :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:06:00 AM

    I eagerly want to be the part of that valley, must be a great life to have an environment like that :D really nice inspiration Anne, I enjoyed to read this poem :) - hug, yanny

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Yanny. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 5:19:00 PM

    If we all were looking for these sweet sentiments, we would already be living in that wonderful valley.....beautiful write Anne-Lise! Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2013 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We must look into our hearts and become better people, Cecilia. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Very interesting and thought provoking poem... I want to find it too.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley",Carol. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poem Anne. You are so right! Best wishes, Larisa

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Larisa. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Such a inspirational poem you have penned here Anne!Hope one day we will find that Valley!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley",kash. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 1/23/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    AN inspirational :))
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:48:00 AM

    Remember James Hilton's Shangri La? I loved that move and the book even as a child and wished there were such a place. Oh, yes, the book was called Lost Horizon. Good write. Love, daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hope you enjoy my little verse. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Daver. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise getting my hiking boots on ready to look, hope we all can find it, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it is important to have good shoes ..... lol - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Owen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:43:00 AM

    I agree that war needs to end, I want peace and harmony so bad! Beautiful poem :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Seth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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