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I can see the sunrise

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I can see the sunrise

Where are we to go ?
Who am I to say ?
and for all we know
Its better this way.

And sometimes we
might stumble blindly and fall
apart so easily
what is, just is and maybe should be.

Although everything may seem so much darker than before
I can see the sunrise.

Early morning rain
that falls into my bed
that once threatened to wash me away
now washes me clean instead.

Although everything may seem so much darker than before
I can see the sunrise.

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 7:13:00 AM

    A beautiful and deeply written poem Even, I am pleased that you still can see the sun. - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 3:45:00 PM

    Oh, wow. I wish I could hear the music that goes along with this one! I LOVE the "early morning rain" verse.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 8:45:00 AM

    Very deep and thoughtful write! I like it