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the two drunk

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the two drunk

They want to enjoy
As they drink beer too much]
They think the result will be glad
And they laugh about it

Suddenly she fails to walk
He also loses memory complete
Their prediction is wrong
They support on each walking going wrong way

They didn’t listen to their parent’s advice
At least someone told you’re going the wrong way
Now they can’t move again
They sit in confusion blaming each other

They sit until they are normal
They now reject what they did
Although they think it was fun
As they disobeyed parental advice

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 4:52:00 AM
    hahaha, well at least they had fun :)