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Message For My Valentine

YOU are the breath I breathe,it's true.
ARE  my wishes to love you hung on a star?
MY  arms ache for you,love,hear my cry!
ONE day you'll see what fate has done.
AND our love runs  deep like water through sand.
ONLY you can lead me from lonely!



This is a message to my love  telling him that he's my one and only!

for contest"My Valentine" with an enclosed secret message

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Well done Deb. Congratulations on your win!! Woohoo!!:) big Huggss deb

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:57:00 AM

    What a loving message! Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:18:00 PM

    Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, Deb! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:32:00 PM

    Amazing win. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:48:00 PM

    Deb... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very fine win, Deb! A true gem! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:03:00 AM

    Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Great write...

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge![Finally I can see the message LOL..hugs!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Congrats on win, I enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your second place win with this VALENTINE, Deb. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Deb; I just love this write of yours ;)

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:57:00 PM

    very sweet. ME LIKES>

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:39:00 PM

    This is a wonderful and intriguing write Deb, I loved reading this poem this evening, What a harmonious piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Lovely poem Deb, I'm so glad you found a beautiful love. Best wishes for you in the contest. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:25:00 PM

    oooo... Nice nice " ;-) this poem is great to read with Valentine approaching ... hope he gets the enclosed message...xox~LINDA