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All I wish

                                                    Tired of living alone
                                                     In this black hole
                                                   With each heartbeat
                                                   I am withering away
                                           A new life only you can bestow
                                            Upon a fragile being like me
                                             Your love can do the magic
                                             All I want is to be near you
                                           Feel you, smell you, hear  you
                                      Wish I could be the button of your shirt
                                  That way I would hear your each heart beat
                             In a world of ecstasy and love ,I would have lived
                                          By being the button of your shirt

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  1. Date: 1/23/2013 6:43:00 AM

    :) well penned Irfana! enjoyed reading your poem today and thanks for your congrats. Congrats to you too on your many such wins.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/25/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yesha....:)))
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:12:00 PM

    and yes,,,, your visit to my poem create a magic,,, i just wanna say my helo and my appreciation to my great Poet Irfana...each line of yours is magic to the readers... luv it <3

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/22/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sukumawati...<3
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:24:00 PM

    I love this Romantic piece. You have pushed the right button. Well done Irfana. Hugs Rick.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/22/2013 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard...:))
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:12:00 AM

    This is nice Irfana, fancy being a button on a shirt . great line xx

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/22/2013 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy..:))
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:09:00 AM

    This is powerful. The way it ends. I want expecting that!

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/22/2013 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Scribe..:))