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Tick Tock Goes The Clock

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Below is the poem entitled Tick Tock Goes The Clock which was written by poet Amii James. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tick Tock Goes The Clock

Tick Tock goes the clock,
They all laughed and hurt her,
Tick Tock goes the clock,
She needs a Doctor.

Tick Tock goes the clock,
Will they ever leave,
Tick Tock goes the clock,
They brought her to her knees.

Tick Tock goes the clock,
You and I both know,
Tick Tock goes the clock,
He will finally show.

Tick Tock goes the clock,
Your time is almost over,
Tick Tock goes the clock,
He’s in a super nova.

Tick Tock goes the clock,
It was almost fate,
Tick Tock goes the clock,
He was just too late.

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Nice Amii, reaching for the clock.... love the ticking sound found in this poem... sad to know he was late... welcome to the soup... LINDA

    James Avatar Amii James
    Date: 1/22/2013 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, it's nice to know people on here are so kind and not judgmental :) xxx
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Amii, welcome to P-Soup! - Tick Tock, I like your poem - Tick Tock, you write well - Hope you will get much enjoyment of sharing your poems and thoughts here with us. - Always nice with the "new poets", meeting new people and sharing even more poems together. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    James Avatar Amii James
    Date: 1/21/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:) I wrote it a long time ago and I though I would post it as my first poem:) I didn't really think much of it though:P Hope you enjoyed reading it :) xxxxx