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The whirling dervish -Haiku

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The whirling dervish -Haiku

Gaining, by loosing
dancing to the mystic tune
the whirling dervish

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:48:00 PM
    love this, the subject a little different for me,, but i'm willing to learn...

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Most do not realize there is gain in loss. It is a lesson taught with age. We are diminished and yet more complete.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/22/2013 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard,rather than age ,it comes with understanding...my daughter is 16 and she is a fan of whirling dervishes and the philosophy related to them....sometimes i feel a bit immature compared to her... its only when we give everything then only we can think of ultimate gain....:)))
    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/22/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard,rather than age ,it comes with understanding...my daughter is 16 and she is a fan of whirling dervishes and the philosophy related to them....sometimes i feel a bit immature compared to her... its only when we give everything then only we can think of ultimate gain....:)))
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/22/2013 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara...:))