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deep freeze

Winter days so  cold and dreary
Cause the soul to grow weak and weary
Ice has covered all the trees
It seems we are in a deep freeze

But Spring  is coming to the rescue
 Bringing  hope and life anew
Blossoms will soon  cover the trees
In will come the tropic breeze

Then will come the butterflies
Fluttering  as  they  beautify
Followed by the bumblebees
As birds sing happily in the trees

Winter soon will  have to go
As Spring comes in with gentle  kiss
 Proclaiming to the cold and snow
 That  winter thusly is dismissed

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Francine's contest, Joseph!! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Hi and congratulations Joseph love the idea of spring giving us a gentle kiss, I am waiting for a full blown smacker though xx

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:47:00 AM

    Congratulations Joseph!!! Well done!! Bring on Spring!;) big hugs deb

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:25:00 PM

    Congratulations! Connie

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:22:00 PM

    congratulations on your winning write..

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:22:00 PM

    congrats on your winning entry in my contest Joseph

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 2/4/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Francine....glad I was able to place in your contest
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:00:00 PM

    Joseph, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Joseph I love how your poem read like a song. Soothe and sweet off the tongue. I live in Michigan and today the high is 61 degrees and tomorrow 20 degrees. At least spring for a day. Good luck in the poem, very well done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Nice work Joseph! Pleasant imagery, but for me to visit the cold is another story. It's winter here in LA, and ive been at the beach this whole weekend. I can't imagine being somewhere that's cold longer than a week. Love the rhyme : )

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:59:00 PM

    Makes me feel the warmth of spring iin the middle of January, Joseph. It's a beauty! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:18:00 AM

    Sure can relate to this one! Love your positive outlook... spring is just around the corner! Yee haw!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:21:00 PM

    this is quite the popular theme now at Soup. And you did it justice , my friend.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 1/21/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:40:00 PM

    I sure your right, can't wait till spring, just dropping in to say hello, have a nice evening, xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 1/21/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rose ......you too
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Joseph, this is so lovely. I'm putting this onto my favorite poems lists and you as my favorite poet today. Best wishes for you in the contest! Hugs and luv, Gail

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 1/21/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Gail.....I appreciate it