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Ray Dillard
Date: 2/14/2013 8:30:00 PM
So wonderfully written, Catie. We do face trials that test our faith. Though thin at times, His love will hold us safe. Please know that your PLACE is secure......RAY
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/12/2013 4:38:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Catie. I can see why it is at the top! Kudos to you!
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/12/2013 11:05:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Catie luv xx
Suzette Crous
Date: 2/11/2013 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win with this heartfelt poem, Catie. Love, Su
Leonora Galinta
Date: 2/11/2013 10:48:00 AM
This is a very beautiful and great lyrics! You did it very well! My big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Catie! love/hugs, Leonora
Becca Lucas
Date: 2/11/2013 10:23:00 AM
Catie this is amazing... congratulations on a well-deserved win.
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/11/2013 9:51:00 AM
Go Catie-Did GO! I new this would take the cake! Congrad's Light & Love
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/11/2013 9:29:00 AM
Good morning Catie, a nice and heartfelt poem.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD
Carrie Richards
Date: 2/11/2013 9:08:00 AM
I was so moved by this poem, and knew that Frank would be also. So well deserved this win, Catie. The story is heartbreaking, and the poem is brilliant, however poignant and too real for words. Best Wishes and congratulations. :)
Debra Squyres
Date: 2/11/2013 8:24:00 AM
This is so emotional...pulls the heartstrings of this reader. Well written and I sang it instead of reading it...beautiful !! Congrats on your win !!
The Situation
Date: 2/9/2013 3:30:00 PM
this is why i like your stuff. it's the truth.
elizabeth wesley
Date: 1/29/2013 8:37:00 PM
If it was a personal experience I can't imagine how one deals with a child gone wrong. It is every parents dream to be amazed at what the produced and somehow the letdown is so hard to bear. A verse to touch the heart.
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/29/2013 12:35:00 PM
Giving up a child must be very difficult, but it is the best option in some cases. Now that the two of you have reconnected, I bet we'll hear even more joyful hallelujahs! Love, Carolyn
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/28/2013 1:47:00 PM
Wow, Catie...this gave me the shivers, and made me cry. I'm glad I didn't overlook this incredible poem! Heartbreaking!
Carol Eastman
Date: 1/28/2013 11:59:00 AM
This was far better than the origional song... Trememdous write!
harry horsman
Date: 1/25/2013 8:33:00 AM
Oh Catie this is amazing, if one can see a poet through their poetry, this is one poem that reveals your wonderful soul.. just love this...
SCRIBE ML
Date: 1/22/2013 2:34:00 PM
Music to my ears our eyes...Hallelujah is the highest praise we can give the creator. Make a joyful noise my love, for he's always on time. For being a strong witness, and leading a soul to him, you'll be rewarded!..I rather be the lords footstool in his kingdom, than a high ranking demon in Hell : ).....all is well!
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/22/2013 4:53:00 PM
Yes, indeed! i know you are right! Thanks so much, Marlon, for the simplest reminder. love and hugs, catie :)
Joy Wellington
Date: 1/22/2013 12:40:00 AM
SOUPMAIL SIS!!!!!
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/22/2013 4:51:00 PM
soupmail coming soon. Love and hugs, your Sis, Catie :)
Joe Maverick
Date: 1/21/2013 3:14:00 PM
Great work on this theme Catie, can feel your own experiences in this also
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/22/2013 4:50:00 PM
Hey joe, so nice to see you! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. hugs, catie :)
frank herrera
Date: 1/19/2013 10:25:00 PM
WHAT CAN I SAY!!! THAT I HAVEN'T SAID BEFORE? YOU ARE A_M-A-Z-I-N-G!! Gotta get in...Needs to be seen! Haven't had any other complaints. LOL...and lots of IT.
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/22/2013 4:50:00 PM
Thanks frank for your awesome comment. hugs, catie :)
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/19/2013 2:19:00 PM
Really really good remake Catie-Did, a couple of slips second verse [His Daddy] last verse [he'll learn to write] BIG hugs sounds like a big winner to me [give me some capital I's too ;)...Light & Love
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/19/2013 6:29:00 PM
Thanks, Deb! I did not even notice those things. Thank you so much for your diligent editing tips. :) Love and hugs, Catie :)
Ruben O.
Date: 1/19/2013 12:31:00 PM
W O W ! ! Exceptional!! I love this poem, Catie! You've created a new song! It's a winner! Great-great job! Ruben.
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/19/2013 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Ruben. So glad you like it. Love and hugs, Catie :)
Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2013 10:43:00 AM
Catie, this is an extremely emotional write. You did a great job of re-inventing the song. Love, Kim
Catie Lindsey
Date: 1/19/2013 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for an awesome comment. love and hugs, Catie :)