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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:30:00 PM

    So wonderfully written, Catie. We do face trials that test our faith. Though thin at times, His love will hold us safe. Please know that your PLACE is secure......RAY

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:38:00 PM

    What a wonderful poem Catie. I can see why it is at the top! Kudos to you!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Belated congratulations on your win Catie luv xx

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your 1st place win with this heartfelt poem, Catie. Love, Su

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:48:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful and great lyrics! You did it very well! My big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Catie! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Catie this is amazing... congratulations on a well-deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Go Catie-Did GO! I new this would take the cake! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:29:00 AM

    Good morning Catie, a nice and heartfelt poem.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:08:00 AM

    I was so moved by this poem, and knew that Frank would be also. So well deserved this win, Catie. The story is heartbreaking, and the poem is brilliant, however poignant and too real for words. Best Wishes and congratulations. :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:24:00 AM

    This is so emotional...pulls the heartstrings of this reader. Well written and I sang it instead of reading it...beautiful !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:30:00 PM

    this is why i like your stuff. it's the truth.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:37:00 PM

    If it was a personal experience I can't imagine how one deals with a child gone wrong. It is every parents dream to be amazed at what the produced and somehow the letdown is so hard to bear. A verse to touch the heart.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:35:00 PM

    Giving up a child must be very difficult, but it is the best option in some cases. Now that the two of you have reconnected, I bet we'll hear even more joyful hallelujahs! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Wow, Catie...this gave me the shivers, and made me cry. I'm glad I didn't overlook this incredible poem! Heartbreaking!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:59:00 AM

    This was far better than the origional song... Trememdous write!

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 8:33:00 AM

    Oh Catie this is amazing, if one can see a poet through their poetry, this is one poem that reveals your wonderful soul.. just love this...

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:34:00 PM

    Music to my ears our eyes...Hallelujah is the highest praise we can give the creator. Make a joyful noise my love, for he's always on time. For being a strong witness, and leading a soul to him, you'll be rewarded!..I rather be the lords footstool in his kingdom, than a high ranking demon in Hell : ).....all is well!

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/22/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, indeed! i know you are right! Thanks so much, Marlon, for the simplest reminder. love and hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:40:00 AM

    SOUPMAIL SIS!!!!!

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/22/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    soupmail coming soon. Love and hugs, your Sis, Catie :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Great work on this theme Catie, can feel your own experiences in this also

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/22/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey joe, so nice to see you! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:25:00 PM

    WHAT CAN I SAY!!! THAT I HAVEN'T SAID BEFORE? YOU ARE A_M-A-Z-I-N-G!! Gotta get in...Needs to be seen! Haven't had any other complaints. LOL...and lots of IT.

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/22/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks frank for your awesome comment. hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 2:19:00 PM

    Really really good remake Catie-Did, a couple of slips second verse [His Daddy] last verse [he'll learn to write] BIG hugs sounds like a big winner to me [give me some capital I's too ;)...Light & Love

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/19/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Deb! I did not even notice those things. Thank you so much for your diligent editing tips. :) Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 12:31:00 PM

    W O W ! ! Exceptional!! I love this poem, Catie! You've created a new song! It's a winner! Great-great job! Ruben.

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/19/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Ruben. So glad you like it. Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Catie, this is an extremely emotional write. You did a great job of re-inventing the song. Love, Kim

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/19/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Kim, for an awesome comment. love and hugs, Catie :)