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CONFRONTATION

CONFRONTATION 



My destiny angrily
 I Confronted
Complaining of the many
Obstacles she put 
On my way, 
Of all calamities and pains
She mercilessly upon
Myself inflicted 

She heard my protests   
With distain
Retorting that the blame
Should not be put on her
But rather upon me
For she had ONCE, 
Myself, heard to
Exclaim:
How beautiful life
Really CAN BE!



©Demetrios Trifiatis
 19 January 2013

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

    profound!!

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

    thanks for your words at my poem 'I sat and pondered"

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:48:00 AM

    I like this, but you think of destiny as a woman. I always thought of destiny as as a man. Was I wrong? Please tell me. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/19/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It doesn't really matter, whatever it is, its function is the same.
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:21:00 AM

    Pretty heavy topic for Light Poetry. Well written emotional piece.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/19/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merci Richard!
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 1:41:00 AM

    Hi Demetrios i hate confrontation, though this on the other hand is a wonderful write, which I like, all the best Owen

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/19/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am with you! We confront someone in order to get justice! Thank you!