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Liberties Slowly Taken

Liberties slowly taken,
"We The People" forsaken,
From our "Leaders" nothing is said.
The economy crashes.
Propaganda T.V. flashes.
Jobs along with answers have fled.


New World Order completed.
Freedom and Saints defeated.
Faith of many shaken.
Deaths long cold rattling groan.
An ancient evil on the throne.
Enemies quickly taken.


For the "Taken" contest


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  1. Date: 2/11/2013 7:30:00 AM

    We are complacent and gradually more and more is taken. If we are not careful there will be nothing of value left to take. Well written. You are good at this form.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/15/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true. Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Christopher, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/26/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You! :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/23/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:46:00 PM

    wow, this is intense and BIG congrats on your win. I love to read tail end rhymes. I will go see one more.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/23/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Great poem, congrats on your win Christ :)

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/21/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:52:00 AM

    oooo this is good! congrats!

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/21/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:57:00 PM

    I like this, Christopher! (not what's happening but how you wrote about it, lol) Good job! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/21/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win today Christopher. Hugs, Gail

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/21/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:30:00 PM

    Why does the story of the Tower of Babel come to mind? Congratulations on your win!

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/21/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You! :) The tower is a picture of whats happening.
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/20/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:54:00 AM

    Enemies quickly taken. great line....

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/20/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Words of profound reason and clarity! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Lori

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 1/19/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You! :)