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Help me please Lyrics to Hallelujah

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Dedicated to the friends I have made here on PoetrySoup who have helped me so much especially Mandy..

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Help me please Lyrics to Hallelujah

I am sitting here with a broken heart
Why did you leave why did we part
No time to plan a special day .......did we
I found my refuge here in Soup
Found new friends 
They  gave me hope
Something to look forward to..dont I

Help me please lord help me please lord 
help me please lord help me pleaaaaaaaase.... Lord

I try so hard to do it right
Stay awake both day and night
One day I will see the light......wont I
Haiku makes my head spin
Tanka brings me so much pain
Only shapes can keep me sane ....cant they

Help me please lord help me please lord
Help me please lord help me pleaaaaaase. ...Lord

I won some contests made me smile
Encouragement was worthwhile
Many went that extra mile ....for me
So thank you all for helping me
Keep writing poems happily
My heart will mend eventually....wont it

Help me please lord, help me please lord, 
help me please lord help me pleaaaaaase....lord

So I no longer feel alone
With think of soup as being home
So many friends to talk to here ...dont  I
Will do my best to please them all
Their time and  effort  I recall
Very many thanks to all .....from me

Help me please lord, help me please Lord , 
Help me please lord, help me lord help me ...lord

I still sit here with a Broken heart
The pain  is there cos we're apart
I feel as though the healing started ...for me
Maybe I will paint  again
Pick up a brush not a  pen  
Might paint a poem for you then....maybe

Help me please lord, help me please lord, 
Help me please lord. Help me pleassssse......Lord


So I thank you Lord for listening to
My prayers of hope asking you
To find me something I could do ....  Oh my
Wasn't told how great a site
Someone here both day and night
Never need to feel uptight ... do you

Yes you helped me, when I asked you lord.   
Yes you helped me When i askeddddd.....Lord.






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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Wonderful song about friendship and hope Seren, I fell like wise, take care and have a blessed day xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Great! I love the concluding refrain. Blessings, Seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Suzette the flipping tune wont leave my brain now...Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Seren ...hallelujah all the way...very well done...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David is it better than the martian one haha ....Seren
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Having trouble with my lyrics...but these are so good!! Of course I found myself singing this instead of just reading. Amazed at the differences in the lyrics written so far that I've seen. Enjoyed singing along this prayer...blessings to you !!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know the feeling, the tune wont go away. was like that with the one i did a few months ago....Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Okay girl you nailed it, very touching and very, very good and I love your 2nd and 3rd verse that just lighten it that touch excellent xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy ....Seren