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About This Poem

Prayer Is Like A Shot In The Dark


When bullets prey......all we can do is pray.

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/26/2013 4:31:00 PM
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    Yes, I remember yours for the play on words, So well done. Congrats, my friend.
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    DEBRA FALGOUT
    Date: 2/26/2013 2:52:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win, such powerful words, peace and love debra
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM
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    Many congratulations on your number 1 my well beloved friend xx
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM
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    Great Monoku here Yasmin!Congrats on the win.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/26/2013 9:33:00 AM
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    Thanks for sharing your thoughts, great use of prey/pray ;) congrad's Light & Love
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:56:00 AM
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    Yasmin congratulation on your win. A powerful win.
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 2/25/2013 11:24:00 PM
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    Very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 2/25/2013 11:02:00 PM
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    Many congrats Yas for this well deserved win
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/25/2013 9:01:00 PM
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    Hi Yasmin, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 2/25/2013 8:00:00 PM
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    Yasmin! This was one of my fav monoku entries in the contest for its strong word play! Full of all the elements of a great monoku! Think of u often and hope u are well! Bless u, girl! gwendolen
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/6/2013 11:27:00 AM
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    so much said....faith keeps us on...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/6/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Did you like Bahrain? its a small place and less polluted...I have not been to Salmaniya, but I know the place...have a good night's sleep....lol
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    Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 1/28/2013 4:16:00 AM
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    Wisdom in a nutshell! Marvelous! Dear Yasmin, Bullets are the obedient agents of blind-soul men! Thank you for your comment
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    The Situation
    Date: 1/27/2013 6:03:00 PM
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    I thought the ghetto was dangerous.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/21/2013 12:09:00 PM
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    Creative work using word play..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2013 11:38:00 AM
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    Agree with you, Yasmin!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/18/2013 4:49:00 PM
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    wow, this is quite clever, Yasmin. Me likes!! and thanks for my placement in your contest. I did not think I had it in me to write on that topic!!
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/18/2013 11:57:00 AM
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    I agree with you friend Yasmin. Prayer is powerful. Thanks for placing me in your contest Have a blessed day always! Hugs, Maria :)
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/18/2013 9:07:00 AM
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    So very true Yasmin!Very good Monoku by you.Best wishes .
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/18/2013 8:15:00 AM
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    Time to bow our heads! Thanks for hosting an excellent contest. I appreciate you adding me to the winners list. This was a great topic and you created dialogue on an important subject. Well done!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 1/18/2013 1:30:00 AM
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    Hi Yasmin very true like it, all the best my soup friend Owen
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 1/17/2013 5:12:00 PM
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    This is a stupendous Monoku and preys on my mind for thought! Incredible poem my friend! Great Work!!
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 1/17/2013 4:22:00 PM
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    How did you make only 9 words so PROFOUND?! Wow! I looooooove this!!
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    harry horsman
    Date: 1/17/2013 1:57:00 PM
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    very profound message is this....excellent Yasmin.
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 1/17/2013 1:00:00 PM
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    Powerful monoku Yasmin, good to see you posting again, how have you been my friend, long time no see, sending you my peaceful thoughts of the day, stay well and keep writing xxx
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 1/17/2013 12:02:00 PM
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    Indeed !! Excellent monoku
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    David Williams
    Date: 1/17/2013 11:43:00 AM
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    Yas, excellent and truthful...David
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/17/2013 11:21:00 AM
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    Excellent Yasmin love xx


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