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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Yes, I remember yours for the play on words, So well done. Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:52:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, such powerful words, peace and love debra

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your number 1 my well beloved friend xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM

    Great Monoku here Yasmin!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:33:00 AM

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts, great use of prey/pray ;) congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:56:00 AM

    Yasmin congratulation on your win. A powerful win.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:24:00 PM

    Very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:02:00 PM

    Many congrats Yas for this well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:01:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Yasmin! This was one of my fav monoku entries in the contest for its strong word play! Full of all the elements of a great monoku! Think of u often and hope u are well! Bless u, girl! gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:27:00 AM

    so much keeps us on...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/6/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Did you like Bahrain? its a small place and less polluted...I have not been to Salmaniya, but I know the place...have a good night's
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 4:16:00 AM

    Wisdom in a nutshell! Marvelous! Dear Yasmin, Bullets are the obedient agents of blind-soul men! Thank you for your comment

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:03:00 PM

    I thought the ghetto was dangerous.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Creative work using word play..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:38:00 AM

    Agree with you, Yasmin!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 4:49:00 PM

    wow, this is quite clever, Yasmin. Me likes!! and thanks for my placement in your contest. I did not think I had it in me to write on that topic!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:57:00 AM

    I agree with you friend Yasmin. Prayer is powerful. Thanks for placing me in your contest Have a blessed day always! Hugs, Maria :)

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:07:00 AM

    So very true Yasmin!Very good Monoku by you.Best wishes .

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:15:00 AM

    Time to bow our heads! Thanks for hosting an excellent contest. I appreciate you adding me to the winners list. This was a great topic and you created dialogue on an important subject. Well done!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:30:00 AM

    Hi Yasmin very true like it, all the best my soup friend Owen

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:12:00 PM

    This is a stupendous Monoku and preys on my mind for thought! Incredible poem my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 4:22:00 PM

    How did you make only 9 words so PROFOUND?! Wow! I looooooove this!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:57:00 PM

    very profound message is this....excellent Yasmin.

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Powerful monoku Yasmin, good to see you posting again, how have you been my friend, long time no see, sending you my peaceful thoughts of the day, stay well and keep writing xxx

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 12:02:00 PM

    Indeed !! Excellent monoku

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Yas, excellent and truthful...David

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Excellent Yasmin love xx