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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
    I should start writing like this ;} I like it, simple and to the point ;}

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Excellent monoku David! If only tears could stop all the pain.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:19:00 AM
    David, a very heartfelt MONOKU... xox~TEX

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:47:00 PM
    David Iam speechless! So petfect?...Seren

    Date: 1/19/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Typos. Grrr perfect*
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:11:00 AM
    this Monku is the best i've ever seen David, amazing statement...

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Very good Monoku on the contest theme David.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Excellent! But this world could do well without both. very well done David with this one. Thanks for your comments at my pages, I am late in responding as I had been away from Soup for over a week.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:25:00 AM
    Interesting thought penned this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Hi DAvid but how many tears will it take, hope you are well and not snowed under, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:59:00 PM
    What a great way to do the theme. I have been wracking my brain and can't think how to do this one!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:23:00 PM
    What an extremely influential write my friend! I loved reading this dynamic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Wonderful, David. Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:03:00 PM
    It is time we start listening, very well said David, just stopping in to say hello, been sick but I am on the mend, take care and stay healthy, xxx

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:19:00 AM
    very pointed David excellent xx

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:15:00 AM
    And the governments keep giving away guns to bad people while trying to take them away from good ones. We live in a bad world. I'm thankful for the light we poets find in each other's work. I enjoyed this.