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Peat-whisky dreams

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Peat-whisky dreams


Evening finds ascension
on a Red Grouse wing;
the brilliant copper sky 
fades to twilight beam.
 
 
It wafts the weathered flora
of a season’s ending term,
as young Skylarks soundly sleep
in the nearby bracken fern.
 
 
The purple hue glints playfully
on a steep highland muir,
with lovers lying blithesome 
on the fragrant heather floor,
 
 
their drunk love on crescendo
with a piper's distant drone;
sharing peat-whisky dreams
amid the summer’s final gloam.




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  1. Date: 8/5/2014 4:36:00 AM
    BEAUTIFUL my friend - Just stopping by to say I miss you on the Soup! - Tim

    Stein Avatar Thvia Stein
    Date: 9/13/2014 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thanks Tim, I finally wrote one today after 18 months. I need to be more consistent!
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 2:34:00 PM
    a subbtle erotic piece. Well expressed.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Just lovely Thvia nice to read your verse again. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:06:00 PM
    And to think it wasn't the famous grouse!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Beautiful poem! -Edward

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:05:00 PM
    I find it difficult to write a poem layered with such fancy wording, but you seem to do it well. I agree with previous commentors, it has a real nice fantasy ring to it.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Words that paint a picture........art.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Hi Thvia just came to read your latest poem, I will come back soon.....David

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Perfectly writen! No over use of colors and rhyming that would satisfy any poet.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 3:03:00 PM
    very nice. You've painted a wonderful word poem. Jack

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Thvia, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:57:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:19:00 PM
    So beautifully written... Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:27:00 AM
    It lives, it breathes, it leaves this reader speechles...you have talent !! enjoyed the read and Congrats on the win !! woo hoo !!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Holy gorgeous write!! Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:46:00 AM
    just beautifully written..Wonderful

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery, and flow... great all round... Terry

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Yes, I think it might fit that theme of fantasy. Because of the way you call it dreams!!!

    Stein Avatar Thvia Stein
    Date: 1/22/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I submitted it yesterday, crossing fingers
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:53:00 PM
    E.R.Burroughs I'm a big fan too, I taught my son to love reading with The Martian chronicles! This seems so Scotland or Ireland have you seen peat cut? the moors..etc? Just lovely Thvia [hey did you realize John Carter was also the name of the hero in the Terminator? I JUST got that..?!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:19:00 PM
    amazing Thvia,, truly amazing,, this is classical poetry at it's best... just love this...

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