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betrayal

the nasty taste of betrayal, the false god, with his feet of clay, shallow men, a truth that fails, toothless liars get to pay, when handsome gets a coat of grey, and no one wants ya anyway:) yer mojo has set sail... re: Debbie Duncan "Missing Pieces" Don

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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Very good ballad! I love the last line :) well done, Don!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:49:00 PM

    This is a delightfully energetic write my friend! I rather enjoyed reading this wondrous and impressionable poem this evening! What a dynamic piece, a surely glorious write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Love it Don,,,, toothless indeed ;} love the play on my words,,,,thank you for your always kinds words ,,, you have a blessed day.