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Don't

zero is a number
one less than one
that makes it a number 
not negative one
zero is a number 
compleat in itself
zero is a goal
good for one's health

nothing is none
and empty is out
barren is imposible
yet silence can shout
gone is'nt absent
away is'nt naught
never implies zero
missing can be forgot

zero smoking, zero sex
zero taking chances on risky events
zero drinking, zero drugs
zero being responsible, zero falling in love
zero disease's, zero hurts
zero damaged reputations 
zero wounded hearts
maybe zero cancer, maybe zero arts
maybe zero errors, maybe zero plays
maybe zero hatred, maybe zero AIDS
zero negativity, zero enemies made

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:28:00 AM

    AWESOME!!! ORIGINALITY PERFECTION.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Awesome piece! Got me thinking, wow, that'd be great. Hehe. Keep up the wonderful work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:22:00 AM

    You have penned a great poem. Wouldn't it be nice to have a world like that? thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 7:14:00 PM

    Great write, wouldn't it be nice to have zero negative..Imagine just how this crazy world would be..

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Great thoughtful statements in this one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 12:17:00 PM

    WOW, now this is an example of creative thinking! Great job, I really love this one!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 12:15:00 PM

    I like this...It really makes you think.Nice write!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:26:00 AM

    I love how thought provoking this is!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:19:00 AM

    there is both sadness and hope in this one, very thought provoking. I enjoyed this one very much. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:19:00 AM

    a safe but dull world don't you think? sounds like an illuminati-controlled world to me, zero everything, shades of 1984 and brave new world (I realized what that book was really about when I realized he'd left the word 'order' off the end of it)

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 1/17/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It'sa poem about prevention. Notice I didn't say zero Soma.
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:33:00 PM

    Genius write situation loved it!!!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:19:00 PM

    I love it ,,,,, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces" guilty is more then zero ;} have a great day .

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 1/16/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:03:00 PM

    I never thought of zero in this way . If everything was a zero we would live in a sheltered world. Nicely penned. love phyl