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Maybe

Tis trick of thought to dream thee so!
Still nearer mine thoughts I cannot release.
The burden of memories I cannot ease
For loves splendors linger still.
Mine most honest heart tortured under
your immortal delicacy
I am bound and chained with
passionate sorrow; half touching madness
For thou art the dream that fadeth too soon
Still in silent musings I am filled with a 
strange sweet hope that someday…. maybe.

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:56:00 AM

    i'm sure such honesty strikes a chord (maybe Bminor) within many of us. lovely words.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Maybe and someday will come. Nicely done with this blank verse poem. One form that I have not tried as yet. love phyl

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 1/17/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Lori
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:24:00 PM

    Yeah, thats what i'm sayin, someday maybe.

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 1/17/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank you for taking time to reading my poem I greatly appreciate it! Lori
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 3:52:00 PM

    For a lonely souls that sits and waits this touches deep within. A fluent read from a delicate hand...very touching. Enjoyed !!

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 1/17/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your most kind comments. Lori