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Winter Night

I sit staring vacantly into the fireplace, as my heart chases dreams that my mind is set to conquer. Flames leap into the air casting long forlorn shadows that seem to stretch forever into the walls. Crackling logs spurt sparks in the air, making little bursting sounds. Outside, the night is quietly chill, as the snow falls steadily, almost noiselessly, like soft white feet sinking into the ground. sparkling icicles brighten the darkening night-- white landscape dazzles It is as if time has come to a standstill. I forget that the noise I hear is the tick tock of the Big Ben. I have not drawn the blinds yet and venture towards the window. I can see nothing through the frosted window pane. snowflakes fall gently wrapping the night in silver-- nature hibernates

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Very descriptive winning work..Congrats on your high placement.Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:45:00 AM

    Hi Yasmin, , Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 5:57:00 PM

    Beautiful! You have a gift, lady :) Congratulations on your fabulous win!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:49:00 PM

    A beautiful entry for Debbie. Congratulations. I miss winter.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:46:00 AM

    This fairy tale landscape has been captured to perfection. Congrats on your win, Yas. Love, Su

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:15:00 AM

    Beautiful haiku !! The prose verse just melted into my soul...I heard the sounds and felt the warmth of the fire. Excellent read...and worthy win. Congrats, Yasmin !!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:44:00 AM

    I knew you would come in the winning list , super luv xx

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:32:00 AM

    This is such an excellent haibun my dear Yasmin. well done and congrats! So late in responding to your comment friend, for I have myself been too busy. Mum's recovering and kids are fine too. Hope you are doing good yourself, super mamma! lots of love your way...

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:34:00 AM

    beauty here,Yasmin...congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:41:00 PM

    congrats Yasmin ....Seren

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:51:00 PM

    Wonderful haibun, Yasmin! Big Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest. love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Oh Yassie, you excell! Not one bit of assist did she need, Yasmin is an art form in herself, Congrad's Light & Love and on to Spring?

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:52:00 PM

    Beautifully written....both prose and haiku. the last line of the haiku is stunning! WEll done!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:24:00 PM

    I love all the intricate details.

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:01:00 PM

    So much beauty is revealed with your words Yasmin, you seem to know how to appreciate the season, sending my love xxx

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 2:17:00 AM

    Beautiful!!!Love it Yas!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:15:00 PM

    Beautiful. I can almost feel the cold air. If you open the door, you probably can see the wind blow the snow across. Does not think I love winter but this I love. Awesome!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:44:00 PM

    You have so perfecte this yas. I loved it so.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin, it was very nice to hear from you.... love the glimmering image... makes me want to hibernate... well talking about chills... i have to turn on the heater ... LOL.. we Texans, are weaklings.. when it comes to any kind of cold air... silly wabbit trix is kids... <---- me... hope you are well and dreaming about unicorns for me... he he he...love~pd

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:22:00 PM

    they use to come quite often. now they are the sign that i have to be at work. but this is a reminder of what i did have. before i had to clean up the snow.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 5:38:00 PM

    soup mail XXXOOO

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:28:00 PM

    This is such a beautiful and luxurious write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing and spectacular poem this afternoon! What a magnificent piece, and so remarkable, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Your prose makes me warm...your haiku is lovely. Joined together, a delightful read !!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:33:00 AM

    Yas, this makes me feel all snug and warm, very beautiful image and a great entry for the contest...David

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Although it is bitterly cold ... it is very cozy and sit in front of the fireplace and be comfortable and warm.- "Listening" in silence and watch the snow fall..... - A good poem Yasmin. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)