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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Missing you... xox ~TEX

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 9:59:00 PM

    This was fun and different. I'm reminded of Dr. Suess with all the sporadic joy and nonsense... "partying in disguise" << that part was particularly clever :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:00:00 AM

    BRAVO... Enjoyed it greatly... My kind of poem!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Love this David,,,, awesome win,, thank you for reading my Bible Stores ;}

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:48:00 PM

    well, of course THIS cute thing made the list. BIG belated congrats, David.

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:54:00 PM

    I extremely love this poem and I also enjoyed the party fun with the warm welcome of the teddies! Great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, David! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:41:00 AM

    This was just too cute to not be found on the winners list....still avoiding the silvered Congrats on your win my friend !!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:27:00 AM

    I could hear the tune before l read of it. Great job on this cute entry David. Kudos on your win!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:20:00 AM

    There were berries and jelly beans and fluffy cotton candy puffs and all the teddies had a jolly old time, I was there David, saw the smile on your face, congrats my dear, you deserve it, xxx

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:59:00 AM

    This is my favorite of al the entries. Congratulations David.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 7:11:00 AM

    I knew this would be a winner the first time I read it. You waved a delightful tale.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 5:34:00 AM

    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:26:00 AM

    Hi David congrats on your win in the contest, snow all gone now so have a great day my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:47:00 PM

    Well done David, nice poem....Seren

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:51:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest David, I was singing it in my head

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed reading...

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Hi David, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* Tex

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Congratulations Sir!!! Well Done!! I never looked at slug tracks as being something so predacious as silver!! So awesome this is!!! Love ya cap'n deb

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:20:00 PM

    thank you' SandyIvy

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:22:00 PM

    I love this write David....very nice....winning wishes

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:42:00 PM

    This is great David, I sang it all. There you are a second job for you a singing poet available for weddings, funerals, bar mitzvahs etc

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Wonderfully writen! I truly enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:03:00 AM

    i ve never been to a bear picnic..You definitely made me yearn for one..Count me in on the next bear party..I just hope not to be their 3rd course meal :).Thanks for your uplifting spirit .Wonderful poem.You are the best.

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 4:20:00 PM

    I looked up the tune to know how it goes- you did this so perfectly! I love it, David. Makes me wanna go dance and sing with teddy bears teehee :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Hi David well what a picnic that was, brilliant as ever my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:31:00 AM

    I can't love this enough! Smiling now.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:02:00 PM

    Sounds so fun. Can I join in? Can have the teddy bear play the drum, lol. We will have a party, lol. So enjoyed!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:11:00 PM

    ha ha... am I invited... :-).... i love this.. David... good luck in the contest... TEX

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:57:00 PM

    this is a very fun poem, David. I like this one, so light and easy on the eyes!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:23:00 PM

    It sounds as very nice day! - A delightful poem to read David - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)