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Wine painted lips

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Wine painted lips

Wine painted lips
Lips the sun had kissed
Left a black mark 
Later became a scar.
It didn’t spoil her beauty
I did what I did this was my duty.
She was my dream
She became my wife, my moonbeam.
We broke many hearts
Not to be apart.
I showed her the way
Just for her to stay.
We drove million miles
Together we smiled.
She is there and I am here
This I didn’t plan
We ended up in tears.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:45:00 PM

    Wonderful write, Ali. The sadness touches the heart. Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem. Just wondering....where are you from? Hugs!

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/19/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen, I am Lebanese married a British from Irish parents. My favorite poet is Gibran Khalil Gibran. xoxoxox
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Very beautiful..with a sad ending but that s the.best poetry

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/19/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Charmaine, Glad you like. Sad ending but it's true. Hugs, Ali
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:46:00 AM

    Very beautiful..with a sad ending but that s the.best poetry

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:43:00 PM

    wow... to paint my lips with wine... Ali, the poem is very sexy... can I call the image sexy.... but the ending is kind of sad... everything was so great... sorry to read about the tears.... xox~PD

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/1/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    a beautiful poem, you have painted,, the wine gave the imagery, the best gloss. that is why I asked for permission... Thank you ALI... and yes, I know what you mean... LINDA
    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 1/17/2013 1:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...And sorry I missed the sex part ;) Love, but not sex! Although sex is a wonderful thing. I am trying to describe a beautiful perfect looking woman, you see being an artist myself I use paints, but I wanted to paint her lips not with paints but with wine... you know what I mean.
    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 1/17/2013 1:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    after nearly 30 years. :( Even though my wife got sick they still don't care. Such is life. hehe tks, a million for listening. Love, Ali xxxxxx
    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 1/17/2013 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Linda, I'm so glad you found the time to comment. This is a personal experience between me and my wife. She comes from England I came from Lebanon, and all odds were against us being from different cultures. Religion and background. We broke many hearts just to be together and we ended up in tears sorry to say. Until now her family are bitter towards my wife....
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:28:00 PM

    Oh...so sweet and touching poem Ali, good rhyme. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 1/16/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry! Iam :)
    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 1/16/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, I happy you liked it. Thanks for the encouraging comment too. Love, Ali