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Winter blues

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Winter blues

Tiny tips of green thrusting their way through the cold earth
You look and scratch your head and wonder, what did i plant there
Its cold, the tiny bulbs shiver as though close to death
Being a friendly gardener I try to block the wind  with care

Be off with you winter you've been here far to long move over for the spring
You have had your monents your chances to shine
You brought the snow to impress us and make childrens voices ring
Winter blues are all but over now , spring will be just fine.

Snow is beautiful I must admit,soft yet scrunchy underneath your feet
The snowman the children built did look rather swell
Carrot nose sultana eyes and clothes I hadnt  finished with yet
But with the sun peeping out, poor snowman doesnt look so well

So wintry sun are you the guide  for springs sunshine, you pathe the way
So those poor tips of green will grow  and bring forth flowers galore
The daffodils, tulips, freesia and snowdrops, loving the day
That the  sun will help you forget those winter  blues for sure.





Dated January 16th. 2013





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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:39:00 PM
    A nice long one just how I like them! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on a deserving win, Seren! Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you annalise, who is that delicious child in the pic, she is adorable ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Outstanding!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard...seren
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:04:00 AM
    I love the cleverness of that poor sickly snowman!! Such a cute twist to the poem! Congratulations, Seren!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Poor snowman they dont last long do they...Seren
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:26:00 AM
    Hi there congrats on another win luv this is great, it really does make one long for spring but shows the beauty of winter too xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    congrats to you too Mandy, yes spring will be more than welcome...Seren
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:24:00 PM
    congratulations on your winning write..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the congrats Mehnaz ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:31:00 PM
    many congrats on your win in the contest Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/3/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Francine .....Seren
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:02:00 PM
    Seren, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:27:00 AM
    hi Seren,, this is really beautiful,, such amazing sincerity in your writing, you bring to the reader a sense of living the words you write,, you remind me of another wonderful Golden poet on this site.... love this... p.s and to think i came back from living in aussie, just to experience the "Winter Blues" again

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha you must be mad, nah its much better here in the UK. she says mumble mumble mumble
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Hi Seren, what a great piece you have done here dear friend, and good luck in the contest. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Rollo not sure if I have entered it yet.
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:15:00 PM
    nicely penned Seren.... good luck in the contest

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph ... Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:36:00 PM
    This is a spectacular and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening and pleasantly expressive poem this evening! You have delighted me with this masterful piece, I love this write! Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 8:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell