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Memories Taken

Memories Taken Memories taken from the story of our lives Confusion blocks them from time to time I hear you breathing trying so hard to survive Fighting not to surrender what Alzheimer’s left behind I see your fragile body before me Your eyes looking so sad over to my way A weakened soul trying so hard to be set free From what this disease has already taken away I see your tears searching for a trace of happiness I dry them in the hope that a smile replaces your sorrow Inside there’s a sense of emptiness Knowing that you might not be with me tomorrow All the memories of us then would be taken To be carried with you up to heaven’s window For God would make sure that our love would not be forsaken From the day I have to let you go… Contest: Taken Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Gail, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:46:00 PM

    This is a lovely way to write about the ravages of alzheimers. A well deserved win, Gail, for a well crafted poem on a heart wrenching topic. I especially like the ending of this one. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:36:00 PM

    This is so real Gail so sad..so true for so many, BIG HUGS! Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:39:00 PM

    Having just lost my mother in law to dementia, I can really relate to this. Congrats on your win, Gail! Well done! Love, Kim

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/21/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kim, I am so sorry for your loss. God bless. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:24:00 PM

    You did it again! Awesome job! I enjoy reading your poetry.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/20/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rachel, thank you for such an inspiring comment on my poetry. Have a wonderful day. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/20/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chrstopher, thank you for congratulating me on my win today. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Congratulations once more on your winning spot Gail , such a sad one this xx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/20/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy, thank you for congratulating me on my win today. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:39:00 AM

    You have such a sensitive heart and it shines here. I've watched too many family members go through the stages of this disease. Heart wrenching. But you have penned this so eloquenty. Blessed be !!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/16/2013 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debra for enjoying my poem Memories Taken luv. The disease is heartwrenching I agree. It's sad. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Another heart tugging one Gail i bumped into people I hadn't seen for a couple of years and was horrified to find the wife in a wheelchair suffering Alzheimer's she is only my age xx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/16/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is heartwrenching to see someone suffer from this. I used to work with patients of Alzheimer's and also my grandmother of 92 died from this as well. Thanks for sharing your story as well luv. Wishing you always a beautiful day. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Very moving entry, Gail. You have stirred the heart strings of anyone who pauses to read this entry..... Love Ya much..... Jake

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/16/2013 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem today. Your poem The Final Battle is being featured in my blog today. You penned a very powerful and outstanding write that expressed such wisdom in spirituality. I wanted everyone to read your poem. Have wonderful day. Hugs Gail
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Very beautiful :) Great Job !

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:18:00 PM

    This is a quality and a masterful write my friend! You have presented a glorious and delightful poem, full of hope for a life that lives within memories that hopefully were not taken away! May you always have them in your heart and remember those special days! What a lovely piece, spectacular poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Your on a roll Gail, way to go, love this, xxx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 1/15/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mystic Rose, I'm trying to get myself so exhausted that I'll dose off. lol Love, Gail