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Eileen Ghali
Date: 5/15/2013 4:56:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful, Becca. I can relate...congrats.
Stucz Arnold
Date: 4/26/2013 5:11:00 AM
lovely words and feelings between the lines,great work
Seren Roberts
Date: 2/6/2013 8:37:00 AM
well done Becca, sorry for the delay in congratulating you...Seren
harry horsman
Date: 2/6/2013 5:38:00 AM
wow so late to read this wonderful winner, so richly deserved.. love this...
ilene bauer
Date: 2/2/2013 7:22:00 PM
a wonderful sonnet and very much deserving of a place in the winners' column. congratulations!
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/30/2013 9:28:00 PM
Hi Becca, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD
Chuma Okonkwo
Date: 1/30/2013 6:06:00 AM
Just read your poem for the first time, and am addicted. Big Congrats on your win.
Heather Ober
Date: 1/28/2013 6:57:00 AM
WOW, this is a beautiful sonnet! Big congrats on your win! :)
Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 1/28/2013 12:27:00 AM
Awesome write Becca! I like how you've related the bending of rules and fears - that which we are not used to becomes that which we fear. Well penned. Congrats on your win!
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/27/2013 10:34:00 PM
Becca, beutifully rhymed and written. Congratulations on your win!
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2013 3:36:00 PM
Fantastic! I can't believe I haven't commented before now. Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Congratulations on win.
Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2013 3:07:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Becca
olusegun Arowolo
Date: 1/27/2013 2:25:00 PM
Excellent and wonderful piece,Becca...Great job..Congratulations on your superb win...
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/27/2013 12:55:00 PM
Lovely poem of devotion. Nicely done, Becca!!
Suzette Crous
Date: 1/27/2013 12:31:00 PM
Your pen never disappoints, Becca. I love this sonnet! Congratulations on your win. Love, Su
Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/27/2013 12:25:00 PM
congratulations Becca , great one to one ...enjoyed reading .......Mehnaz
David Williams
Date: 1/27/2013 12:02:00 PM
Becca, congratulations on your placement, this was for me a compulsive read, it took me on a journey that had a fine twist at the end and you chose a good form....David
Frank Polgar
Date: 1/24/2013 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem. If only love could always have a happy ending and not cause us pain.
cherl dunn
Date: 1/16/2013 3:59:00 PM
ALL I HAVE TO SAY BECCA IS ONE WORD FOR THIS POEM AND IT EXPRESSES IT MOST WELL BEAUTIFUL. THANK YOU
Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 1/16/2013 12:52:00 PM
Great poem, deep and heartfelt. Sometimes things happen for the best. this reminds me of a poem I wrote once. You Were Never Mine. maybe I'll posted one day. Smile Jesus Loves you. Lucilla
david scott
Date: 1/15/2013 12:41:00 PM
wicked wrirte mate you have soup xx davidscott
Gail Angel Doyle
Date: 1/15/2013 8:56:00 AM
This is remarkable. I love your style. Luv, Gail
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2013 6:55:00 AM
Do not be afraid to open your heart, Becca - A touching and nice poem, good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
DrJim Martin
Date: 1/15/2013 6:48:00 AM
Very nice!! I had thought of entering the contest but after reading this I probably should not!! Great write!! Jim
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/14/2013 11:50:00 PM
wow, I had no idea this one was one to one until I got to the end!! Good job. Your meter in your sonnet is awesome here!!! Luv, Andrea