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9 KISSES IN THE LIBRARY contest of 9

            
                         9 KISSES IN THE LIBRARY

        First kiss meandered through Sci Fi by the purple 
        wall. The tender second kiss arrived around the bend.
        mumbling 3rd and 4th excuses as she frog jumped 
        twin matrons chatting with their dead and absent friends.
        Sweet and slow-- the next three left her breathless-- 
        Zinged and knocked her senseless to her bony knees.
        She braced herself--for just two more--oh, please--
        At 9pm she's startled by a subtle shoulder tap,
        Bodice ripper pages shuddered with a final schoolgirl snap.


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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:49:00 PM

    As I promised, I come back to read the final version. : ) Belated congratulations on your win, Victoria! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:25:00 PM

    You made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely in this contest winner.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Vicky - Ralph

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Victoria , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win my dear Victoria! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Wow Victoria,, i like this,, and your last line is a stunner...hope everything ok with you....

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Ouch! I have bad news for you, Victoria...Tracie's contest rule's "nine words" (not syllables) in each line. I'll be back to see the revised version...so far so good! ; ) Have a nice evening. Ruben.