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no battle,no glory

With every breath
there's an abounding grace,
with every moment
an appointed place,
with every hope
there is a fear to face,
with every race
there is a certain pace.

there is no trial
if there is no attempt,
there is no rise
if there was no descent,
and where opposition
is often met,
there is the place
our efforts be well spent.
Without such resistance
no man can become stronger
for he has not learnt how to stand
much less knows he how to conquer.

so whenever faced with times like these
let the thought your spirit please
that you wouldnt be where you are
if you never crossed rough seas.

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:58:00 AM

    That's why it feel so good when we accomplish. Looking back and embracing the struggle makes the victory sweet! Good write!

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 2/1/2013 3:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, im only glad to impart what was given me by God. thank you for taking the time to read my work and be blessed.
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:18:00 AM

    soup mail...

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 1/21/2013 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx alot David.
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Naldeem welcome to the soup, I like the way you crafted this piece but if I may say I would not list it as blank verse, ' blank ' is the last thing it is...David