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Beating heart

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Couldnt quite get the shape correct sorry.


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Beating heart

                                                         a
                                       Heart.                      Heart
                                    Is beating.                Is beating
                                  Sending hope and    promises.....
                                     pumping    ideals and   ideas
                                       reducing  life's  stresses.
                                          ready to look for love
                                             to accept to take..
                                                   for always..
                                                      xxxxxx.

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:17:00 AM
    The ideals and the ideas, the things that keep us, well I should say me, going. This poem if looked at quickly seems simple, but is very powerful. Is it the nurse in you that pointed out this duality between the body and the mind? The physical aspect as well as the ideas. I really liked this poem, hopefully there was a duality intended lol, if not, well that's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for sharing.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you looked beyond the words......Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:59:00 PM
    This is really beautiful my dear friend, just like the creator. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww thank you Rollo, glad you enjoyed it...Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 1:19:00 PM
    The artwork is simply adorable, and the poetry is incredibly warm and loving. Nice one Seren :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmm was just looking at it looks like its been broken now will have to fiddle with it.. thanks for the comments James....Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Seren my beating heart sent you a soup mail....

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Seren what happened / where did it go??

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:16:00 PM
    “The heart may sell a part of the soul to get what it wants.” Heraclitus. Beautiful image and feeling, wonderfully expressed!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Demetrios...Seren
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Love it Seren, clever. Just inspired me to try this form in the future. xox

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me inspire someone, wow thats a first.....Thanks Robert ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 7:42:00 AM
    you have given poetry meaning and shape, i like it. i do hope to be as imaginative a poet as you.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Naldeen I have only been on this site for about 6 months. so I am a new writer. They are all friendly here, come and chat anytime...Seren
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:01:00 AM
    WOW! This is lovely in shape and in content! I love hearts! I'm a hopeless romantic! You've done a great job with this! Glad I read this today! Hugs!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thans Eileen not my best shape but never mind. Thanks for calling in.. Seren
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Seren very well done, I like the way you covered the possibility of reading from left or right....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David lol always cover the inevitable..Seren
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:31:00 AM
    You are so good at shape poetry , well done and he is there waiting, cwcth (that doesn't look right ) xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/14/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol cwtch. Whose doing it?